Unproven Chapter Thirty Five "Cave of Wonders"
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Recommend Reading Introduction to Unproven
DEFINITELY READ Prologue
Chapter One Chapter Two Chapter Three
Chapter Four Chapter Five Chapter Six
Chapter Seven Chapter Eight Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten Chapter Eleven Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen Chapter Fourteen Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen Chapter Seventeen Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen Chapter Twenty Chapter Twenty One
Chapter Twenty Two Chapter Twenty Three Chapter Twenty Four
Chapter Twenty Five Chapter Twenty Six Chapter Twenty Seven
Chapter Twenty Eight Chapter Twenty Nine Chapter Thirty
Chapter Thirty One Chapter Thirty Two Chapter Thirty Three
Chapter Thirty Five
When his head breached the surface he looked around, spotting her over by the other embankment next to the far falls. She beckoned to him with a grin and disappeared into a cascade of water. He swam toward the place she’d disappeared and climbed onto a rocky ledge. Squinting into the falling water he caught a glimpse of something and suddenly her head broke through, startling him. She sputtered and laughed as water sprayed down her face, “Come on,” she managed then disappeared behind the watery wall once more.
He held his breath and walked through it, and she grabbed his hands and led him forward until they were out of the spray, standing in a cavern.
“The cave of wonders,” she stated, sweeping her arm across the space.
It was poorly lit, but he could make out a little of the stone walls and floor surrounding him. He glanced back at the pouring water he’d just walked through and found that the way the sun illuminated it made it look like a desert mirage.
Ary stroked his arm, pulling his attention away. Her gaze was riveted between his legs and he smiled slightly as he looked down. His prick was fully erect and waving. He hadn’t had sex in more than forty hours, and considering he’d been expecting it for the past three of them no amount of chilly water could have an effect.
She looked back at his face and smiled slowly, her eyebrow raising in question.
Oh fuck yeah. He charged her, wrapping his arms around her and lifting until her legs were wrapped around his waist, his cock pressed against her. He covered her mouth with his and backed her into the wall, kissing her furiously. She made a noise of excitement and he grabbed her arms, pinning them over her head by their wrists and holding them there with one hand. He grabbed his cock and found the entrance then let it go and grabbed the underside of one of her thighs, pushing it up and back. He thrust into her, his legs nearly buckling at the feel of her, hot and tight and moist, and for a moment he just stood there, buried to the hilt. When he was certain he wasn’t going to collapse he pulled out and slammed back in, increasing his pace until he was fucking her like a battering ram.
“Oh my God Grayson, oh God fuck me just like that!”
Oh man Aryanne just said Fuck, holy shit that was hot. He hoisted her up so he could suck on her tits, going from one to the other as he continued to pound.
“Mmmm, yeah,” Ary continued to murmur, lost in sensation. The feel of the cold wall at her back, her butt hitting it repeatedly as he drove into her was intensely erotic, even the slight pain felt good, skyrocketing her to orgasm. It hit her like a nuclear bomb and she screamed his name, dragging out the syllables before babbling incoherently.
“Oh Jesuussssss,” Grayson hissed in near agony as he began to spurt. She was milking him so hard he couldn’t pull back to thrust but kept pushing and grinding into her, licking her nipples and squeezing her thigh. He groaned long and low as she continued to milk the come from him, squeezing and pulling until there was nothing left. He released her wrists and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, holding her head against his pounding chest as he rested his on top of it.
It took several minutes for his heart to stop racing, but even then he didn’t want to move. He was beginning to lose count of the times that he’d felt that way with her. How could he ever let her go? The thought hit him like a punch in the face and broke him out of his trance. He put her down abruptly and whirled around. He pushed back through the wall of water and dove into the pool, swimming down as far as he could, attempting to outrun his dangerous thoughts. He came back up gasping for air then dove down again. It took three more times before he’d accomplished his mission.
He turned in the water, treading lightly, and saw her sitting on the rock ledge, her toe making circles in the water as she watched him with those pretty gold-flecked eyes. Her expression was lightly curious with a hint of concern.
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I just caught up on the last 3 chapters - it's good to read it all at once! I can see the progression of the relationship clearer! Douche is retreating slightly but I still don't trust him - he has a lot to prove lol The last 2 chapters are awesome :)
I know, there is a definite down side to reading chapter by chapter sometimes, it can disrupt the flow of it. I like to wait for two or more chapters when I'm reading someone else's :)
Thank you!!
It's interesting to see if all the wild sex with Ary would change his mind. I've been thinking about it, and I thought of something cool to do for stories like this. I'm not sure if you're even considering making changes to this since you've already self-published it, but something to think about for future stories of the same nature.
Since he's in the know of something she's blind about, how about writing two separate chapters depicting the same scene from their different perspectives. On her part, Ary just feels like Grayson's bummed out because of her sadness, but in reality, it's so much deeper than that. I think the contrast plays well with that format.
Well I finally caught up on your tale of woe and debauchery. No, wait, I just described the trending page! You write well, and spin an intriguing tale. I gave you a mention last week in The Library in case any new readers hadn't stumbled your way.
Good novel
Man that's was totally erotica, you got me reading til the last act buddy your use of words are simple and usual, sexually alert, but I enjoyed reading
Ha yes, this chapter was definitely erotic, I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Hmmm....Grayson is still on this quest of his. I have missed alot and i have had to go back and read about four chapters back. The story progression is intriguing. Grayson is caught in the web of Arys innocence and purity. How have you been @dreemit .