Beach weekend: A short story for BeachWednesday

in #photography7 years ago (edited)

The following is a short story I wrote for #beachWednesday, illustrated with pictures I took on a family beach trip last June in Oregon. The rock pictured is just one of the "haystack rocks" on the Pacific coast. What I loved about this rock was the way it seemed to change personality with the changing light and weather.

Beach weekend

The family climbed up the steep dune, which muffled all but a muted bellow of waves. Finally, they crested the rise where cloud-clad sun, gulls, and a broad seascape lay before them.

Spectacularly, a giant rock dominated the view, hulking and mysterious in the late afternoon light, with sea birds swirling and landing in its crags.

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Hats blew off their heads and the breeze ruffled their hair. They removed their shoes and let the fine cool sand squish up between their toes. No one else was on the beach. It seemed to have been waiting just for them, displaying the most brilliant, jeweled sea.

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Soon, it was time to go back to the beach house for dinner. Bags of groceries from the local market sat on the tiny kitchen counters, and they had yet to unpack their luggage. They had plans for pasta primavera with hot French bread and wine for the adults. And there were games to play.

Blair, the youngest one, said they must all come right back out after dinner. They had come here for the beach, hadn’t they?

“There will be time,” her mother said. “We’ll be here for three days of fun and beach play.”

But Blair insisted they had to come back out again when dinner and dishes were done. And so they climbed the dune again as dusk fell and the gulls scurried to their evening roosts. The rock was even more mysterious and majestic by evening light. They strolled the beach with huge gray storm clouds gathering. "I'm ready to go back now," Blair said.

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That night a rain storm thrummed on the roof of the beach house like millions of tiny clapping elves.

Everyone in the morning reported all manner of odd dreams--about goblins, unsolved mysteries, and people who stepped out into the night for a smoke and were never seen again. Over coffee and cocoa and syrupy pancakes they talked about their dreams, wiping their eyes to be rid of them.

"The rain stopped!" Blair said. "Let's go see if the storm washed up treasures from the sea."

But when they crested the dune to face the ocean, the sky was clear and bright, the rock's mysteries were hidden away, and the beach was washed clean.

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They spent that day hiking, tidepooling and picnicking, then took a trip into the little village to buy polished shells, souvenirs, and saltwater taffy. Blair looked for the perfect souvenir, but she did not see anything she liked.

That evening everyone was too tired to go to the beach, except for Blair who insisted they she must make one more trip to the beach to watch the sunset.

Her mother agreed. "Okay, baby, let's go. It will be pretty this time of day." And indeed, when they arrived at the beach, the setting sun's pink and orange glow illuminated the waves, and the rock was again cloaked in mystery. There wasn't another soul on the beach. Blair waded into the edge of the surf, the cold water chilling her skin. And then she found it. The perfect souvenir--a piece of deep blue beach glass, polished in the shape of a dolphin.

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Thank you for reading!

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I absolutely love this story! Biased view as I was there when the photos were taken, but I don’t think that is why I love it. You capture perfectly the mercurial mystery of a very special and beautiful place and it’s interplay with a family.

I’m so glad you like it, @ducksaplenty (my sister, for any readers who may be curious). Your response really makes me happy. I think back on that trip, and all my attempts to capture that rock in various dramatic lighting, and I think not just of the wonderful time on the beach with our kids, but also of the beautiful and dramatic views of the ocean, punctuated by that landmark, and how it was almost another personality present with us during that time. I knew I couldn’t effectively capture that in photo-journalism, and so the fictionalized version came to life. 😁

Yes! That rock is another character in the story. Well done. I so enjoy reading your writing.

Thank you so much, @ducksaplenty!

The story is great, but it feels like there is s o much missing! I honestly thought you'd go somewhere with the goblin dreams, but ya left me hanging. Shame shame.
Jk. The pictures are gnarly! I don't know why, but that rock is lowkey horrifying.

Well thanks! Now I know what you would have told me if I put the story in the queue. This is a very lightweight story, only intended to complement the pictures and help tell the contrasting stories of people and a seascape. (Shame? My goodness! That’s a first.)

I will do some thinking about whether this story has enough merit to continue on. But honestly, it was just an experimental piece—a way to try combing my photography with some flash fiction. Cheers!

That's fine! I was joking with the whole "shame" thing. Or was I...?
¡Hasta lluego!

That’s okay, I’ll get you back. Heh heh heh!! (When you least expect it—like those t-bone accidents when you are innocently driving through an intersection!) I kid! I kid! Have an awesome day, my friend.

Way to level up the beachwednesday theme. Really cool pics here, and a story to go with it.

That last photo is pretty epic :)

You are the one who inspired me to jump onto this challenge! I love the beach. Yes, I was amazed by the light at different times of the day. I must have taken 30 pictures of that rock, just trying to capture its moods.

Thank you!

This is a beautifully narrated story plus the pictures taken are amazing. I was just honestly feeling like I am on a beach. Love to visit natural places like this.

Thanks so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that it gave you that beachy feeling!

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