Funny me - Day 91 of the SSPC by Daniel

in #funny6 years ago (edited)

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Weird I feel when I talk to some people
I kind of go into a queer mood
Am I an introvert?
Why do I feel so uncomfortable
when answering personal questions
yet I feel close to my online friends
who I feel will never make me queasy
I must be a strange person
who hid behind sofas when a little girl and visitors came
age has crept in and I am still the same
am I the only one to behave like this?
Like my teacher once said
I live in my own world
but thankfully
I do not see any rabbits around
or the Cheshire cat

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entry for Announcing the Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge! (Total Prize Fund 2000 SBD)

I write poems to express myself. I started writing at the age of twelve or so and some of my poems were published in magazines for children, a time when print still ruled the world. The internet and the blogging world has helped me write poems. Most of it was as I wrote earlier, to express myself and my thoughts. I have also been a ghostwriter.

Steemit has helped me write with freedom and also earned me very good friends who encourage me to write. I hope my readers will support me and also join in this contest. I am not a student of literature and so I do not consider myself an expert in poetry. It is the judge who will decide.

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The poem list

What is love to you? आपके लिए प्यार क्या है ♥ Day 1 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The river - Day 2 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Wisdom - Day 3 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Feelings - Day 4 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Light and peace - Day 5 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Bored - Day 6 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Music is my life - Day 7 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Roses - Day 8 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The sea of red and green - Day 9 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The challenge - Day 10 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The funny bone - Day 11 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Winners - Day 12 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Juicy fruits - Day 13 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Temple premises - Day 14 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Special - what is special to you? Day 15 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Patience - Day 16 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Respect - Day 17 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Fun and happiness - Day 18 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Are you a robotic human? - Day 19 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Woman - Is she a 'piece'? Day 20 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Fly high like the eagle - Day 21 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Plant a sapling - Day 22 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Kerala - Day 23 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Perfect place - Day 24 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Sketching - Day 25 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Emotions - Day 26 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Passion - Day 27 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Why fear? - Day 28 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Blessings - day 29 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Disbelief - day 30 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

self-pity - day 31 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The yawn - day 32 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Mind and muddle - day 33 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Food, Water, and Air - day 34 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The truth day 35 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Music is my life - day 36 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

What does fame cost you? day 37 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The journey of the soul - day 38 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Deceit and love - day 39 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Prayers - day 40 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The Road to Success - day 41 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

I am the river - day 42 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

True love and courage - day 43 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Posh City or fresh air - day 44 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

April Showers - day 45 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Examinations - day 46 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Are you lazy? - day 47 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Your loving pet - day 48 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The rain of hope - day 49 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The secret - day 50 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

United for peace - day 51 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Childhood fancies - day 52 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

I am an ant ♥-----------♥ day 53 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The mermaid - day 54 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Hurry and Worry - day 55 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

I am a tree - day 56 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Willpower and lack of it - day 57 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Crypto revolution - day 58 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Divine yoga - day 59 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Nonsense - Day 60 of the steemit school poetry contest by @d-pend

When in doubt - day 61 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Awakening - day 62 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The greens - day 63 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Chants - day 64 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

disconnecting with reality day 65 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Life lessons -Day 66 of steemit school poetry contest

Mother Nature - Her fury, day 67 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

What brings a smile to my face? Day 68 of the SSPC by Daniel

Lucky charms - Day 69 of the SSPC by Daniel

Nothing is impossible - Day 70 of the SSPC by Daniel

The lover's wait - Day 71 of the SSPC by Daniel

Hallucination - Day 72 of the SSPC by Daniel

Arise and awake - Day 73 of the SSPC by Daniel

Emotions - Day 74 of the SSPC by Daniel

Men and Women - Day 75 of the SSPC by Daniel and entry for comedy open mic round 14(2)

Dignity of labor - Day 76 of the SSPC by Daniel

Live life now - Day 77 of the SSPC by Daniel

Fright - Day 78 of the SSPC by Daniel

Nirvana - Day 79 of the SSPC by Daniel

The test - Day 80 of the SSPC by Daniel

Enlightenment - Day 81 of the SSPC by Daniel

The bird and the human - Day 82 of the SSPC by Daniel (Grandma stories series - 7)

Goals of life - Day 83 of the SSPC by Daniel

The Train - Day 84 of the SSPC by Daniel

Monsoon season - Day 85 of the SSPC by Daniel

A farmer's delight - Day 86 of the SSPC by Daniel

The mood ♥ Day 87 of the SSPC by Daniel and @prydefoltz Friday Poets's Exchange

Line of control ♥ Day 88 of the SSPC by Daniel

A few thoughts ♥ Day 89 of the SSPC by Daniel

Roses ♥ Day 90 of the SSPC by Daniel

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Very authentic, I like that.
I think a lot of people "suffer" (lack of a better word) these feelings. I actually feel the same way while talking to some, most people. I feel that in live interactions we are picking up the frequencies of their vibration and it makes us feel some kind of way according to receptivity to these frequencies. Each case is different I believe, ( yours maybe more extreme than mine.

I really liked this poem because it showed me inside of your mind and gave me glimpse into your world, though we have never met.

The only thing I wish is if you gave more examples so I could have a deeper image but that just me wanting more lol.
Also the formatting, maybe some stanza and another picture that portrayed your feelings like this maybe, at the top.

All in all good authentic poetry . Good one man.

Thank you so much for taking the time to analyse and guide me. I will include a picture that could express the emotions.

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