The mermaid - day 54 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

in #poem7 years ago (edited)

The mermaid

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clothed in her fins
shining like a pearl
she swam towards the ship
hoping to catch sight of a human

she loved to see the men
they looked so handsome to her
she loved to see the dresses the women wore
and looked down sadly at her own

the dolphins loved her company
she played with them a lot
she too wanted to be with her kind
but she had been alone since a child

lusty eyes followed her
she knew it did not mean well
she swam away and did not look back
went back to her own place

there lay awaiting
a man so handsome
he smiled and welcomed her
he too had fins

she thanked the gods
went and confirmed he was real
she was so happy, she felt
hoped it was not a dream

the sun shone
the water was calm
the world seemed so beautiful
she did not search again

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entry for Announcing the Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge! (Total Prize Fund 2000 SBD)

I write poems to express myself. I started writing at the age of twelve or so and some of my poems were published in magazines for children, a time when print still ruled the world. The internet and the blogging world has helped me write poems. Most of it was as I wrote earlier, to express myself and my thoughts. I have also been a ghostwriter.
Steemit has helped me write with freedom and also earned me very good friends who encourage me to write. I hope my readers will support me and also join in this contest. I am not a student of literature and so I do not consider myself an expert in poetry. It is the judge who will decide.

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The poem list

What is love to you? आपके लिए प्यार क्या है ♥ Day 1 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The river - Day 2 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Wisdom - Day 3 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Feelings - Day 4 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Light and peace - Day 5 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Bored - Day 6 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Music is my life - Day 7 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Roses - Day 8 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The sea of red and green - Day 9 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The challenge - Day 10 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The funny bone - Day 11 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Winners - Day 12 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Juicy fruits - Day 13 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Temple premises - Day 14 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Special - what is special to you? Day 15 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Patience - Day 16 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Respect - Day 17 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Fun and happiness - Day 18 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Are you a robotic human? - Day 19 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Woman - Is she a 'piece'? Day 20 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Fly high like the eagle - Day 21 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Plant a sapling - Day 22 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Kerala - Day 23 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Perfect place - Day 24 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Sketching - Day 25 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Emotions - Day 26 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Passion - Day 27 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Why fear? - Day 28 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Blessings - day 29 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Disbelief - day 30 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

self-pity - day 31 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The yawn - day 32 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Mind and muddle - day 33 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Food, Water, and Air - day 34 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The truth day 35 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Music is my life - day 36 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

What does fame cost you? day 37 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The journey of the soul - day 38 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Deceit and love - day 39 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Prayers - day 40 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The Road to Success - day 41 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

I am the river - day 42 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

True love and courage - day 43 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Posh City or fresh air - day 44 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

April Showers - day 45 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Examinations - day 46 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Are you lazy? - day 47 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Your loving pet - day 48 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The rain of hope - day 49 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

The secret - day 50 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

United for peace - day 51 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

Childhood fancies - day 52 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

I am an ant ♥-----------♥ day 53 of the Steemit school 100 day poetry challenge

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A wonderful tell. Very well constructed. I am glad the mermaid got her happy ending:)

thanks a lot, dear

I see you're really telling a story, I love the fact that your story enjambed from one stanza to another it's quite a style I adore, would have been more rhythmic should it have rhymed however it's not a problem, I love your style of writing it's amazing.

I do try rhyming but seemed to be too difficult in this one. Thanks for the feedback

What a vivid imagination!

thanks dear

Interesting poem about a mermaid.
I like how you use the stanzas to tell a story of how 'she' found a man she so sought after.

thanks, it really is awesome to get positive feedback

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