Rain~ #freewrite day 54

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She lifted her arms above her head as the rain slowly made its way down her body.

Lifting her head up, slowly tilting it back, her face received the full extent of the rain as it came down, slowly, running over her whole body, cleaning her of the thoughts that had plagued her over the last weeks.

It was a soft cleansing rain that she had needed for a long time. To cleanse her body, her soul ......and just live in the moment.

She started to twirl left to right, slowly, then switching directions with a jerk, her wet skirt flew out, sending rainwater miles off into the field.

Her laughter could be heard for miles.

The villagers all breathed a sigh of relief that their Lady was once again back to her normal self.

The town loved her so much but when she was in a dark mood, they knew, only time would take that mood away. They had learned to let her be until the blackness passed.

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This is my Day 54: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: rain that @mariannewest hosts daily.

I can not encourage you enough to try it!! You will not regret it I promise!

Happy Writing!
Snook

Here are a few of my other #freewrite if you care to read more:

Freewrite - Prompt: salty air
The taste of Chicken #freewrite
Single Prompt Option - Weekend Freewrite
The Weekend Freewrite 6
My reflection on MarianneWest's #freewrite
Day 49: mosquitos
Day 48: describe green
Day 47 : airplane
Day 46: gullible
Day 45: the smell of a dumpster
The Weekend Freewrite 5

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Very poetic writing! I Imagine the Lady of your story like a princess of the faerie people, adorable like a gentle rain when Happy, but terrible like a storm when angry. :) Lo

Thank you so much @marcoriccardi!!!! and never make a Lady mad! :D

Thank you for your beautiful comment too!!

All ladies should be able to feel the joy of dancing in the rain! Lovely story @snook!

Thank you @brisby!! and they should at least once in their life!! it's worth the soggy cloths!!! :D

I wish it was as easy as stepping out into the rain to cleanse away all of the bad thoughts and set me in a better mood. When I was young, dancing in the rain with a nice lady might just have done the trick, these days I would just get wet. 😏

I do too @deaconlee!! Sometimes I think we have to make our own rain to dance in to put us in better moods tho. One of the bad and good things about getting older I think. hugs

So wise to leave her alone until the dark mood laves her!!

Very! LOLLL

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