Free Write: Benevolent dragon prompt

in #freewrite5 years ago (edited)

The smoke is offered to all
Who seek this elusive creature out
Chasing the Dragon
Is rare nectar for the mind..... By @swedishdragon

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Benevolent Dragon

I heard the fabled Dragon song
it rose above the waves for me
I jumped aboard my sturdy ship
and sailed across the raging sea

Krakken fiercely destroyed my craft
tis a wonder that I survived
tossed about several days at sea
the ocean spat me out alive.

Her voice beckoned me now "COME FORTH!"
I journeyed through the rocky caves
Every bit of strength exhausted
behind me crashed the Ocean waves

My defenses left behind me
approaching with no sword or shield
her radiance shone before me
to her beauty, I humbly yield

She appeared to me a woman
Her lovely skin in golden tones
she warmed me in the evening light
in magic lair of chiseled stones

This old sailor's mind now wonders
was it a dream in dark of night
was it real that fateful meeting
When the Queen dragon held me tight?

Dragon, oh sweet Dragon will you sing your song for me? Will you send it 'cross the ocean? Will you sing your song for me? Will you send it o'er waters and to my ears on lonely shore? Will you send it to my sail ship and with magic, speed the oars? Will you turn into a woman and hold me once again so tight OR will you flame me with breath a burning and sear me in your sight?

Poem: Naltedtirt
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Oh I wish I could write that freely! when I'm writing a poem the words come very slowly.
Nice work.

Thank you so much. Glad you liked

Well done! The rhyme and rhythm are cool, and the theme of longing and wondering if it was all a dream is even cooler.
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Ohhhhh I love this! And love that the dragon appeared as a woman hehhee

You should do a reading of this and post it!!! :)

@mariannewest asked us to do a reading of our freewrites from this past weekend! I might just have to do that! Hehehe

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She wants a recording? Cool

Thsnk you for loving my freewrite!!

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Very pretty piece, @naltedtirt :) I really like the rhythm and rhyme, and the way it finishes is very romantic and yet full with both excitement and dangers of maybe having encountered a Dragon Queen in the seas :) I really like it :)

It makes me happy when you like something I write. Thanks so much for your kind comments.

woow!! mindblowing!!!! your so soo talented!!
this si delsih :D

I heard the fabled Dragon song
it rose above the waves for me
I jumped aboard my sturdy ship
and sailed across the raging sea

I willll take full creds for this ;) ♡ 🐲ℒℴve 🐉♡
<purrssszz....

& dragon music is comeing ^^

You are the one that inspired it!! Take all the credit, please.

oh ohh that ONE is on my playlist!!! did i say ; i DOOOOOOO like you!! LOL cheeses nooo one ever likes this one when i play it ;)

This is how I show my love
This is how an angel cries
Blame it on my own sick pride
Maybe I'm a different breed

rest my case 🐲🐉💗

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