The Empty Chair #12 - (5 minute freewrite challenge)[Picture prompt]

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Once Tommy climbed down into the basement, he wiped his brow, rubbed his eyes...

The latest Day 112: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday - Prompt:


If you missed my last freewrites on the theme, here are the links from latest to last:-

  1. The Empty Chair #11 - (5 minute freewrite challenge)[prompt: Dream]
  2. The Empty Chair #10 - (5 minute freewrite challenge)[prompt: California]
  3. The Empty Chair #9 - (5 minute freewrite challenge)[prompt: yard sale]
  4. The Empty Chair #8 - (5 minute freewrite challenge) [prompt: Palimpsest]
  5. The Empty Chair #7 -Weekend Freewrite 2/3/2018 - Single Prompt Option: Airplane
  6. The Empty Chair #6 - (5 minute freewrite challenge) [prompt: The smell from within]
  7. The Empty Chair #5 - (5 minute freewrite challenge) [prompt: Elephant]
  8. The Empty Chair #4 - (5 minute freewrite challenge) [prompt: Cigarettes ]
  9. The Empty Chair #3 - (5 minute freewrite challenge) [prompt: Cracker]
  10. The Empty Chair #2 - (5 minute freewrite challenge) [prompt: Paint]
  11. The Empty Chair #1- (5 minute freewrite challenge) [Prompt: hardboiled minds]

Picture Prompt


Once Tommy climbed down into the basement, he wiped his brow, rubbed his eyes for a while as they adjusted to the torch light. The details started to register. What was this? Wait – the empty chair shackled to the iron post, it had fresh blood. He spat on the floor, tweaking his nose to lock out the vile smell. Now he noticed the crimson spill he was standing on, walking on. He didn’t know whether he was walking further away from it, or further toward it. He hesitated for a moment, but ignored the caution of second thought, torched further, at the rusted rails, and tank pipes running up. He couldn’t miss the fingermarks of crimson, like nail scratches…on the greyish walls, the spidery networks now tagging on his blue shirt. A little further into the darker, colder end, and all he could hear was water drops, some sort of leaking from the drum a foot further, and higher than him. He stopped, unsure if he wanted to know what was inside….
He threw caution to the wind.and was about to take another step, when a voice spoke from in front of him, as though from inside the drum,
“Beyond there, there is no turning back!” Tommy’s heart pounded, his feet froze, he started to scream…
That was when another voice, familiar, and stern intruded, jerking him back, into the comfy colors of a fine lamp lit room. Tommy quickly put the Blue book on the table, breathless, as he read the writing on the cover: “24 Empty Chairs”
“I told you not to read that book!” Jack said, “It is still incomplete!”

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Nice post bro.

how been following your posts.
you are doing well bro

keep it up

Hahah. How are you brother? Thanks for constantly sharing in my works. I have been in and out for the last couple of days, a little taken up with some errands, although i have made sure to squeeze time to make the freewrites. I have not been able to do more engagement, but i am somewhat free now, some hours now to spare, and should be able to read and curate other peoples works. I should quickly check into the discord, see what you have there! thanks, much

I really liked the ending! Great freewrite. Thanks for sharing.

I am glad. Thanks for reading on.

Very nice ending. Thanks for this series.

And thanks for following along, really.

HA! Great job!!

I'm hopping from Freewriter to Freewriter dropping the prompt for the day!

Day 113: 5 Minute Freewrite: Friday - Prompt: ski

Thanks @snook. I will turn on freewriter mode at around midnight (East Africa Time) that is about 4-5 hours from now. Some errands to finish for now. Thanks

Good job. Just curious... why "empty chair"?

No specific reason, just that it seems to speak from and to most of our life's experiences....both sad and happy. You know, at some point in life some one...a colleague at work, a sibling, a parent, a neighbor.......yes, some one either left, or will leave, and what you are left with, is the reminder of that empty chair, physically or even symbolically.
The point is, life twists us in more ways as can only be reminded as by the specter of an empty chair....It stirs in my large volumes of emotion, and freewriting them is allowing me to break free!!!

Even you got creepy with this prompt :)

Hahahah...i did. I thought it was a good opportunity to give a headsup to all on the number of empty chair freewrites i am aiming to accomplish.

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