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RE: Sand castles - Original poem - 100-days-poetry-challenge-day-18
But tonight there will be millions of stars
and a radiant full moon
shining on my sandcastles.
yes, the strongest lines of this piece are at the end and are universal human experiences, but you have built to them well, just as you have build the sandcastle well, to weather the waves of life and get to the night on the beach under the heavens blanketed in starlight.
Thank you for sharing, @zeleiracordero.
Thank you, thank you very much @carmalain. I am very happy that you read me and that you liked what I am producing.