Task #1: Review A Crypto Game DApp!
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Here is my review of 0xUniverse:
○ https://medium.com/@mertens.achim/find-rent-and-sell-planets-in-the-0xuniverse-43cb32e9e358
○ https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@achimmertens/uoeqlnb-find-rent-and-sell-planets-in-the-0xuniverse
https://twitter.com/greensniper/status/1094318754371117057
Thanks for the review of 0xUniverse, as I haven't seen any other reviews about it so far. The German text on the screenshots are a bit hard to read, that doesn't really fit with the English language in the review itself.
I did really like that you are showing your own planet, and continued the review after a day, so we get some more feeling for the gameplay.
Meta review score: ☄️☄️☄️☄️
Here is my review on World of Ether
Steemit Link - https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@menoski/world-of-ether-game-review-raise-breed-and-battle-against-monsters
Twitter Link - https://twitter.com/Menoski_Dennis/status/1093980495539564545
I just got a retweet from World of Ether's official Twitter handle, it feels so cool (smiles)
Good review, I like that you put the game it in context and compare it with similar games. A critical tone with good reasoning is always welcome!
Meta review score: 🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍
Here is my final review and it's on CryptoKitties
Steemit Link - https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@menoski/cryptokitties-game-review-why-is-this-game-one-of-the-most-popular-and-addictive-crypto-game
Twitter Link - https://twitter.com/Menoski_Dennis/status/1094677181618442240
No worries @menoski, I have seen your review about CryptoKitties :)
You make a nice comparison between human beauty traits, family trees and the appeal of CryptoKitties. Very insightful!
Meta review score: 🐾🐾🐾🐾
Here is my review on Axie Infinity
Steemit Link - https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@menoski/axie-infinity-game-review-raise-your-axies-for-battle-time
Twitter Link - https://twitter.com/Menoski_Dennis/status/1093332826227990528
Another good review by @menoski. I don't have much to suggest as improvements :)
Meta review score: 🐪🐪🐪🐪
I was becoming a bit worried since I got no review comment from you @mids106 on my last 3 reviews.
Thanks for the Meta review score, it was your first suggestion, I used to improve my other reviews. Thank you very much @mids106
No worries & sorry for the delay. Writing reviews is hard work 😉
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hey @menoski - Love the review! Well presented with images inserted at the right places!
What would have been even cooler, is to see a live battle from your own Axie's and/or an image from your Axie collections.
You mentioned having played many games, how does Axie Infinity compares to the ones you are familiar with?
Anyway, loved it and found it very clear!
I would make sure I make use of all you have said to get a better review article next time.
I'm glad you loved it and big thanks for reading it through @ctrlalt
Also thanks for your nice feedback
Here is my review of EOS Knights:
https://steemit.com/powerhousecreatives/@bengy/eos-knights-dapp-gaming-review-for-oracle-d-aka-steemmonsters-vs-eos-knights
Not sure if you want the Twitter link here, but here it is!
https://twitter.com/CryptoBengy/status/1092180192934748160
Good job on getting the first review of this task out. As I mentioned on Discord, you did certainly raise the bar :)
Meta review score: 🌟🌟🌟🌟
Thanks for the meta review! I think some of those things I can improve on...
The Twitter related parts, I really have to get more use experience with it. I have the account, but I pretty much never use it, so I'm a bit of a novice with it, but I will definitely put up a profile picture!
Yes, probably I should have cropped the screenshots! It didn't occur to me, as that is how I interact with the game!
Im afraid the change to not mention Oracle-d came after I had published, so unfortunately, I couldn't edit link address, however, I was able to fix up the rest!
He he, you don't like upgoats? They are cute!
.. But thank you for the feedback, it will help improve my writing for the future!
Hey @bengy - Great review, lengthy without feeling lengthy. I like that you share some desktop screenshots, but it would have been great to have a closer look at the images.
I have to say that it is very clear, so good job on that. One thing that disappointed me for an informative review was the self-promotional part at the end... Besides that: 😎
Thanks, I will keep the screenshot idea in mind for next time, I didn't realise they wouldn't zoom easily! I will likely just take photos from my smartphone as that seems to be the easiest way to get better results.
Which part of the self promotion was not so good? The Ledger advert? Or the community banners?
Here's my review on EOS Knights.
https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@pangoli/tgizjsf-game-review-an-introduction-to-eos-knights
https://twitter.com/wizzyblast11/status/1093423037645578240?s=19 I think I earned a retweet from SOTD. will be expecting a review. Thanks.
Thanks for your review. It is a pleasure to read, visually well formatted and even your tweet is an eye catcher.
After thinking hard, I only found two things to improve:
Overall, I think you did an excellent job with your review.
Meta review score: 👑👑👑👑👑
I've never had a better review! I know what to do next! Thank you.
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- pangoli
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Here is my Review On Hyperdragons
Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Meta review score: 🐲🐲🐲🐲
Thanks for the feedback, it is really helpful. And I would definitely make use of them in future tasks.
Thanks again @mids106
My review on EOS Knights
https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@otemzi/oiterip-eos-knights-gameplay-review-i-think-am-addicted
https://twitter.com/otemegift/status/1092920571132854272
https://twitter.com/otemegift/status/1092921459545161729
https://medium.com/@otemegift/eosknights-time-to-earn-more-eos-d0e8af0a204e
Thanks for your article, let me give you my feedback:
Hopefully you can use these points to your advantage in future tasks!
Meta review score: 🦄🦄🦄🦄
Thanks for the points much appreciated, I will put them into use next time 😁
Compelling review! I think I'm gonna go and play the game now 😁
Thanks, the more the merrier 😁
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Thanks for your review of CryptoKitties.
As a little feedback: when you mention the 7 steps showing how the game is played, I'd write your own text to explain in your own words what the steps are. Some screenshots can provide supporting content, but reading the text with the small front size is difficult.
Meta review score: 😼😼😼😼
Can you link your Steem post as well? The link "Steemit post" isn't to your article, but to the task description.
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Edited @mids106 now Steemit post will redirect you here
My review on God's Unchained
https://steemit.com/stateofthedapps/@ferrate/god-s-unchained-review-7fe543d42101
My tweet
https://mobile.twitter.com/appawd/status/1093471108811182080
Thanks for your second submission, I can see that you improved your review based on the feedback for your previous submission. Good job :)
You have some typos in your article, for example a space too many or missing. Please review an article carefully before posting it! While an article with typos can still be understood by the reader, it looks less professional and is more distracting to read.
In your conclusing you compare Gods Unchained with Heartstone. I’d love to read more about your comparison with it. How is it different? Which one is better and why, etc? This would make the review more interesting to read.
Meta review score: ⛓️⛓️⛓️
Thanks a lot for the review. And am happy I have improved a bit and with the corrections, will get through again. Thanks a lot
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