Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #32!

in #finishthestory6 years ago (edited)

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A contest with a pot of 3 STEEM + 5 @steembasicincome shares? You're in the right place!

144 @steembasicincome shares awarded till now (plus 22.558 SBD and 22 STEEM) through the contest in 31 weeks!


Here are today's yellow finned prize categories, caught fresh for you:

1st place : n. 3 STEEM

2nd place : n. 2 steembasicincome share

popular vote: n. 2 steembasicincome share (remember to vote your favourite!)

Best comment to the stories: n. 2 steembasicincome shares

@f3nix here, your adorable cenobite (and no.. that's not a Rubik's cube, but you can play with it if you like).
Today I'll administer a story which some of you will recognise as part of the "Tower 19" saga. Actually, more than a saga it's just a series of connected flashes with some common themes, for now. I hope you will enjoy and feel inspired by it, it's a story of freedom and about everything that your imagination will suggest you.

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  • Tell to a friend about the contest!

  • Join the Bananafish Realms discord chat for fresh updates and other amenities.

  • Vote, vote, vote your favourite story (and win 2 STEEM)!

  • Use the #finishthestory tag.

  • Try to post your story the earliest possible and not at the last moment (or after the results! argh!)

  • Respect the 500 words limit.

  • Help our contest & workshop to grow by giving it some visibility.

And now.. let's dive into today's story!


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Awakenings

by @f3nix



The hoverbike lay abandoned on its side, the engine still warm. The fine black dust carried by the incessant wind was a snake that crept in every small recess.

From the top of the dune the Tesseract 19 could be seen with the naked eye. The column pierced the black sea of ​​graphite and challenged the dark crimson sky. The awareness of his distance made him wince. That construction was enormous. That impenetrable artifact, Moloch's sharpest tooth.

Intertwined with dust, the warm wind brought an imperceptible howl: the bark of the monolith, an omen of death.

The man waited, a stiff exoskeleton bent over the black sand. The helmet lay abandoned beside him. Soon the team would have arrived.

"Soon you will arrive too and everything will be accomplished, one way or another."

He thought of her smile, her courage, her strength. "My life, how could I've been so reckless to have you involved in all this?" The tears were already kneading blackened as the memories of their happy normality swept over him.

"I can not let them find me like this". He stared at himself from outside: another tower on a dune, far more uncertain than the one that howled his feral wish.

These and other demons echoed within the chambers of his soul, when his eyes met a green sprout. The man stared that little miracle that, against every odd, was striving to affirm its existence. In the midst of that sea of bottomless ​​despair.

The tear finally found its way lingering and bathed a leaf. The man managed to pull himself together and, now smiling, he put on his helmet.

"This Moloch will tremble, time has come for an awakening."


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Let’s the Bananafish Tribe grow together!


The wise potassium kami Bananafish wants all of its beloved people can benefit from rich upvotes. For this reason, knowing that unity is strength, it asks for SP delegations and for numerous commitments to the voting trail.

With delegations, @bananafish VP will grow and consequently the upvotes given to every contest entry will be higher. @f3nix, @tristancarax, @theironfelix, @raj808, @brisby, @maverickinvictus, @cyemela, @marcoriccardi, @calluna, @oivas, @anixio, @ntowl are the names of the proud Bananafish Knights who already delegated a fraction of their SP to this project.

Following the voting trail is a way to make sure you always support the other participants to the Bananafish contests, automatically upvoting the posts (but not the comments) @bananafish upvotes. @foffelius, @steelochlaver, @f3nix, @marcoriccardi, @anixio, @gwilberiol, @brisby, @calluna, @ntowl, @dirge, @iamthegray, @seesladen, @theironfelix, @letalis-laetitia, @vdux are already in the trail.

If you’re interested, here you can find all the information needed.


Bananafish Tribe supports @anarchyhasnogods project called Collective Intelligence. Cheers to our yellow-finned buddies @theironfelix and @dirge who are moderators in the @co-in community.

This is a promising model, which rewards quality based on a decentralised consensus protocol… what does it mean? You can submit worthy posts to the @co-in platform and hopefully this will result in some interesting upvotes for the author. Many submission to Mizu No Oto and Finish the Story contests have already received upvotes from Co-In.

Join in at Co-In site here!
https://collectiveintelligence.red/

Or join on Discord channel to interact with the community!
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Join the fun! Here is how this contest works:


  • An unfinished fiction story or a script is posted.

  • You finish it with your own post or a comment in the comment section. A limit of 500 words is recommended.

  • WIN 3 STEEM + 5 @steembasicincome shares to the writers with the best endings and comments.

The result will be out on Wednesday 24th October, 14:00 PM GMT+7 avg. (U.S. West Coast time zone). Submission and voting deadline: still Wednesday 24rd October, 12:00 PM - noon GMT+7 (U.S. West Coast time zone)

A special thank to @tristancarax, @theironfelix, @raj808, @brisby, @maverickinvictus, @cyemela, @marcoriccardi, @calluna, @oivas, @anixio, @ntowl for their precious delegations, making this project a reality!
If you like this contest..SPREAD THE GOSPEL! We're grateful for your resteeming and word of mouth. Everything helps to grow together!



GOOD LUCK, BRAVE STORYTELLERS!



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Vote here your favorite story!

@dirge has put out a classy bit of writing. Nice Work!

Although, perhaps, there are better written stories, my vote goes to @ehr.germany for being able to move me more, to bring me into a fairytale dimension with the boy's song, which makes a sprout of life grow in the black desert. I think that her ending is the most symbolic, the most poetic, and the one that conveys a more positive message, that is also closer to my personal sensitivity.

This was a very hard pick, I really enjoyed @agmoore's upside down take, that still managed to make the story feel complete, but there was such artistry in @dirge's entry so if the great banana deity was feeling particularity wrathful about sticking explicitly to the rules, my vote land there

@dirge gets my vote.

This week there was an abundance of beauty and the grotesque in the stories, and much of it inspired by a wisp of a plant. Fascinating. I will vote for @dirge this week because I'm a fan of fairy tales and his was a fairy tale on a grand scale. A sad ending, with the possibility of escape...classic finesse.

My vote for this week is for @ehr.germany's ending. 🌱



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This post was submitted for curation by: @theironfelix
This post was given a rating of: 0.9952980732528653
This post was voted: 95.4%

This one was fun here is my entry.
my entry

I'm glad you liked it!

Not sure how to vote. I vote for @stever82.

Hey @blockcurator! Nice to see you in the Bananafish Realms, allow me to invite you in our small family of fiction writers. Here's the discord link.

Cool. See you there.

A little over the word count but I trimmed as much as I think I could without losing the idea I had in mind.

I had a good time writing this one.

https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@tristancarax/awakenings

Did you eliminate all the adverbs? 😉

haha. No

But, I don't write many of them so I would have gotten rid of about five words. 8-)

Here be me submission: The Void of Tesseract-19 of this contest.

The Void.. I see you're pushing this theme. Interesting.

UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! And yeah, [expunged].
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My entry, a little bit of a stream a consciousness, edited later:

https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@marcoriccardi/awakenings-lifeslide-finish-the-story-32

I love when you just write about the voices in your head!

I don't want to kiss @f3nix... Shut up! Shut up!!!

Hahaha cursed me for joking about them! You gave a @steelochlaver style answer 😂

Oh, am I too late to grant the marital procedures? If not, you may kiss the bride!

I'm in the game. I turned this one around a bit. I hope that's OK. This was an interesting exercise--had to do a bit of learning to carry it off. Thanks for a rich beginning, @f3nix.

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In the Realms, we adore things turned upside down! 😜

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What are you talking about

Hi, it was a reply to bananafish. Bananafish is using the Dustsweeper service to protect profits below the minimum payout level.

Thanks for the clarification!

this round I am joining you.
What a simple yet touching and elegant beginning of @f3nix.
It caused many memories.
Here is my entry:

https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@erh.germany/finish-the-story-contest-awakenings

I'm glad you joined us. Thanks for the appreciation, their scope is to inspire and resound with the writer's inner world so.. hurray!

Howdy to you @dirge! Will you write a mystery/horror for edition #33?

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