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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #32!
A little over the word count but I trimmed as much as I think I could without losing the idea I had in mind.
I had a good time writing this one.
A little over the word count but I trimmed as much as I think I could without losing the idea I had in mind.
I had a good time writing this one.
Did you eliminate all the adverbs? 😉
haha. No
But, I don't write many of them so I would have gotten rid of about five words. 8-)