Surprise Coming to You
Its when I turn off the lights
that's when the thoughts come
slip into the light
lying cuz they never were bright
Its when I turn off the lights
I never know where I am
where you are
Stealing from the truth
I turn off the lights
like a surprise coming to you
never moving thru you
I was never meant for you
Its when I turn off the lights
that you show your true self
unbridled
in pain and pleasure
Its when I turn off the lights
you aren't there
you're never there
no matter my fiction
I turn off the lights
reality slaps me
brings me back to the real me
you were never really, really
Its when you turn off the lights
you find the surprise
coming to you
I don't wanna turn off the lights
don't wanna know what's true
and what's lies
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That was lovely! Very in touch with your guts, your poetry is gritty real! And...
My birthday and the New Year are coming up, and it seemed like a great time to thank my most engaged followers. I went through my last week of posts and made note of all my followers who actually commented, and I am leaving you all a tip! as my way of saying "Thank you!" and as my birthday gifting!
Awe, thank you hun, for both <3
When is your birthday?
love you too!!! Awesome poem and there have been times in my life ...
Here are your weekend options
15 min 3 prompt exercise
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-12-30-2017-part-1-the-first-sentence
Or single prompt option
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-12-20-2017-single-prompt-option
Yea, I know <3
Thank you, I will be tackling it tonight ;)
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I like that
Thanks :)
Thx for the content!
Glad you like it!
Interesting poem, will follow for more!
Thank you so much <3
did'nt know you write poetry kitten , i do too :D
I'm guilty of writing poetry from time to time ;)
It is too lovely i liked it. :)💕👏👍
Touch with us.thanks
I'm happy you enjoyed it <3
Very nice freewrite poem, @arbitrarykitten! I just love to see the result of @mariannewest's prompts. But I think this is the first freewrite poem I've read. It's very thought-provoking!
Oh wow, thanks! It just couldn't be a story, it had to be a poem- I couldn't force it ;)
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