Runaway Rhymes 🌀 The Honey in the Pain (Original Poem)
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The Name above perplexes,
Our vaulted visions vex us.
The Dream told through the ages,
Torn out from modern pages.
Though its hidden sparks remain,
Guarded, by our greatest pains…
The Honey in the Pain…
As I took those bold first steps,
Did Dad catch me so I could rest?
Dare walk backwards from me!
That it was a test, I didn’t see.
Walking without thought,
Now realizing what I’ve got…
The Honey in the Pain…
You’ve stung me so much, I can’t fathom your touch.
But through it I’ll work, if you’re also willing to hurt.
‘Cause to talk brings it out, takes away our doubt,
Above-all we’re both here, despite common fears.
So this suffering has served its purpose,
The tears shed out, strengthened and conserved us…
The Honey in the Pain…
Thanks @hopehuggs and everyone who participates in Runaway Rhymes!
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Thanks For Your Attention and Support!!
Melech ben Chaya מלך בן חיה, @inphiknit
Oh this poem speaks to me....The Honey in the Pain… this suffering has served its purpose..
I'm so glad! May we all get better at seeing it^~
Outstanding poetry! I like your style. ☆☆☆☆☆😎
Thanks brother! Gotta train myself to see the little things you know^^ lol
For sure. Little things need attention too.
:)
How are you? I hope all is good.
B"H Thanks^^ Very well. Weekend is almost here! You chugging along?
good jobs @inphiknit
Thanks @alamboge^^ :)
I like the way you write :) Outstanding post :D
Very kind of you! Thanks :)
Very much enjoyed this one. Thank you!
Thanks for your appreciation!
Very deep and quality poem with moving words and complimentary images. I really like the phrase and sound of The Honey In The Pain, it's very catchy and thought provoking. Best of luck to your entry. Also big big thank you for the donation, that is very nice and charitable of you. I really appreciate it, and I have added your name to the Donor's list and updated my progress. Thanks so much again.
I'm very happy you enjoyed and that the phrase sticks to you^^ Thanks for the nice compliment!
You and your family deserve to be together, so it's my genuine honour to be able to help a little bit, you're very welcome :)
You're most welcome :)
And I appreciate the help again. You're a kind soul
You don't know how timely that is. I really needed that... Thanks...
And yw, it's a joy :)
You're very welcome as well. We all need to uplift one another, we never know where each of us are in our lives, when we have fallen and scraped a knee or our face is buried in dirt and grim, but we are all brothers and sisters desiring friendship and love, so it is my pleasure to give what I can, even through words, because words and intentions that fuel them have much power in this life.
If you've read my posts about the Hebrew language, then you know how much your comment resonates with me. Intentions through words, are the seeds for everything that is real. Like the feeling in me, that your vocal support and friendship generates, and like anything that will ever come from it. (B"H) And since we can either create or destroy with words, your comment also reminds me to strive to put more care into the words I choose to use, or not...
Makes me think of;
"Whoever destroys a soul, it is considered as if he destroyed an entire world. And whoever saves a life, it is considered as if he saved an entire world." (Yerushalmi Talmud 4:9, Babylonian Talmud Sanhedrin 37a.)
Thanks brother :)