Little Reminders, Big... 🌀 (An Original for PoetrySlamChallenge #10)

in #poetryslamchallenge8 years ago (edited)

Mind descending, 

Eyes pretending, 

Ears denying, 

Nose defying, 

Tongue maligning, 

Trunk desiring,  

Hands contending, 

Glands demanding, 

Feet just standing… 



Unlimited potential, though again do I choose, 

With this vehicle I’ve got, to barely make use. 

Time carries forward, but I’ve noticed it all now, 

One desire at a time to change, let’s examine how… 


If I learn for myself, can I study for you? 

Is my favourite meal, mom’s gift to me too? 


When I see an ambulance, notice what do I think, 

Do I care about time, or the man on the brink? 


Does taking a rest, have to be just for myself, 

Or does it make me my best, so that I can be of help? 


Is her beauty before me, only to bring out my lust, 

Or does it remind me to thank You, for giving Your trust? 


Going to work for my money, is my usual way, 

But if I do it for family, does it gladden my day? 


When I make any action, do I go through the motions, 

Or do I really feel what I’m doing, with total devotion? 


If I setup these rules, not to nullify, but flip each desire in my life, 

Will they have me happy, aware, and doing what’s right?! 


Image #1, #2.


Thanks to @prufarchy for running the PoetrySlamChallenge, and to everyone who appreciates and supports the development of other's skills!!


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Thanks For Your Attention and Support!

Melech ben Chaya מלך בן חיה, @inphiknit

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Extraordinary poetry! Thank for sharing your art! ☆☆☆☆☆😎

Thanks so much! Your compliments always hit the spot^~

Great build up and beautiful poetry. I like it.

Much appreciated, thanks!

Very kind of you to say, thanks so much :)

You're always welcome:)

Cheers! Good article today from you also! Lots to think about...

Thanks glad you liked it:)

Great job. I have to put something together for this challenge!

Thanks! You should for sure!

I love how you broke these poems up. Truly feeling you on that last sentiment. The struggle is real.

A constant and integral battle!~

I really appreciate your thanks and connection :)
Nice to meet you^^

Edit: Just read several of your poems, and followed you now. I like your style, much more image rich than mine. I should work on that more :)

Followed you back. I like your style as well!

Thanks x2^^

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