Kindred Spirits On Chappal Waddi ¬ A Short Story For A Fiction Contest

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Akin watched him sleep. He was shivering, even after wearing two coats and wrapping himself in Akin's wool blanket. Akin wondered how he made it that high up Chappal Waddi, what could have brought him there alone, and what he was searching for. Akin had long given up on the world and everything in it. The allure of mankind had lost its taste, and to a man who had seen it all everything seemed meaningless. But this man made him remember what it was like living with people and having a family, he looked just like Akin's grandson Fadeyi who died fighting for the British.

"Drink" Akin said offering the man a calabash of water as soon as he woke up "It will help your strength."

The stranger accepted the offering and drank slowly. It felt awkward having another human in his cave, the only other people he had interacted with were mountain climbers living their lives of adventure, and he ignored them mostly unless a life was in danger.

"Thank you for saving me" came the stranger's voice cutting the silence like a knife.

He gathered some strength and sat up with his back to the wall of the empty cave.

"Who are you?" Akin asked with his eyes fixated on the man's face, "And why did you come here?"

"My name is Boluwaji Williams, and I came here to find life." The man replied.

"You came to the mountain of death to find life?"

"Ironic I know, but every man has his battles and what he must do to conquer them."

Akin did not understand him but did not want to pry. Hearing Boluwaji talk further displayed the resemblance to his grandson in his mind; maybe discarding reincarnation was too hasty he thought.

“And how about you sir, why do you live on this mountain?” Boluwaji inquired.

Akin took a moment to think, he never expected to be asked any questions so he never thought up any answers.

“I am Akin. I live here because I want to and there is nothing left for me in the world.”

“Then we must be kindred spirits. I am also here because I lost everything. A priest told me to come here with two coconuts as an
offering to the mountain god, it makes no sense to me but what choice do I have.”

The first gift Akin gave his first wife was two coconuts. She had joked that his balls were bigger than the coconuts because she was promised to the river goddess Osun, and as such no man was to approach her. He ended up running away with her in return for a curse from the goddess.

A loud laugh erupted from Akin’s lungs and filled up the cave. Boluwaji thought he had gone mad, but Akin was laughing because he thought it funny how his wife kept their offspring safe and led him all the way up the mountain, yes it could have only been her. And for the first time in 68 years Akin did not feel alone.


Thanks for reading. This is my entry for @kyrios' fiction writing competition. UPVOTE and all that other stuff if you liked it.

Image used courtesy of pixabay.com

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Wow.. you are so talented.. well done

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The ending made me laugh. Good story there @lordmok. Oh the coconuts ahaha

Thank you for that interesting prompt.

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Wow! This is funny. Hahaha. A good laugh is nice at the end of a rough day. Thank you and good luck!

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.

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