🎭Poetry Slam Challenge 7💸: Whispers of a Castle - 城堡凄诉(by @ace108)steemCreated with Sketch.

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This is the first time I am putting in a second entry for the
#poetryslamchallenge for the week. Firstly, special thanks for the
people who inspired this:

Anyway, the pictures are all of Dunstanburgh Castle taken by @thecryptofiend.
If you know a little more about the castle, have a look at these:
From Wikipedia
From English Heritage

Now, my other problem is which picture to use and how to incorporate the poem. After eliminating a few by personal preferene, I still have quite a number. So, I present to you the poem "Whispers of a Castle" in 6 different ways.

Let me know which way of presentation you like best and why you like that option by leaving a comment. I shall transfer $0.08 (Steem Dollar) to the person who leave a comment I like most. :-)




这是我第一次为本周的#poetryslamchallenge 提交第二份作品。首先,特别感谢启发这首诗的人:

这贴的照片全都是由@thecryptofiend拍的Dunstanburgh城堡。
如果你知道更多关于城堡,看看这些:
来于 Wikipedia
来于 English Heritage

现在,我的另一个问题是使用哪个照片,以及如何融进这首诗。凭感觉删除了几张还剩甚多。所以,我以6种不同的方式向你呈现“城堡凄诉”。

请用留言让我知道你最喜欢哪个方式和为什么。我会将$ 0.08(Steem美元)送给我最喜欢的评论的人。 :-)



Note: I shall transfer $0.08 (Steem Dollars) to the person who leave the comment I like most.


注意:我会把$0.08(Steem Dollars)送给我最喜欢的评论。


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Don't forget to leave a comment for a chance to get $0.08 (Steem Dollars) from me.


别忘了记留下评论换取一个机会从我得到$0.08(Steam Dollars)。

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Hey @ace108, great work!
I'm really happy to see that you made it happen.
Also thanks for the mention, I usually resteem posts in which I was mentioned. This post was well worth it.
As of the design, I couldn't really decide, so i made another version for you:
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Hope you like it!

Thanks again @shortcut

You offered me a different perspective of how I could have done it. Although it is not on option I had done, your comment gave me good value in learning something.

💸I've transfer $0.08 (Steem Dollar) to you. 💰😎

Wow, thank you very much! I'm very happy that you saw my comment as a chance to learn something. This is really cool! I really love steemit for this kind of engagement.

Now, that is a cool one. Wish I could have thought of that.

I love the different preparations of the poem on different photos!

Thanks for you comment.
Which one do you like best and why do you like that?

No 5, I think it is the blue. It reminds me of a Scottish gloaming!

Thanks, it may have something to do with the Scots. :-) I'll have to read about the castle once more.

#5 has the best composition; although if it were mine I would crop a little tighter on the right side. It is also better because the text is more readable, which is as or more important than the photograph.

Thanks for your comment. 2 leaning to choice 5.

Fantastic! Thanks for using the photos and the shout out:)

You're welcome and thanks for sharing your pics. :-)

I never know that you are such a poet! Well done! Personally I like the English one much more than the Chinese one. Also the poem goes really well with the photo.
關於中文詩, (不是批評, 是建議 :P) 老鼠愛大米, 似乎太過輕浮!? (或許是我對這詞不熟悉, 畢竟是大陸用語) 另外, 既然你用繁體, 你的"翻"應該為"番"才是... Just FYR

Thanks for your comments. I do feel the English is better too. The Chinese version in the medieval castle didn't feel quite right but I decided to have a little bit of fun. Always good interesting comments to learn from. Thanks again. As for being a poet, I write very little poem in the pass but decided to join in the fun #steemitphotochallenge (which I have to sit out this time for the Autumn theme which we don't have in Singapore and #poetryslamchallenge and perhaps more.

So glad I could catch this before payout to show my appreciation.

Beautiful!

Thanks. Glad to see your comment too.

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