[POEM] - My Liquid Half | Alcoholism Awareness Poetry

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Ahoy, Good Steemitizens!

I have a poem for you.
Enjoy!

I used a website I found online to generate 10 words for use as seeds
to create today's poem.

After considering the words for some time, the girlfriend and I
cooperatively created this poem.

We decided to do a poem about alcoholism, as it is a serious
issue for many people. The poem is from the view of the
abuser, as he interacts with the substance. The abuser does
not hold back his confessions, he presses them forward into
the light.

Now let the seeds grow!


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SEED WORDS

spray, breathe, alcohol, rest, session, censorship, crevice, peel, agreement, faithful

Words generated randomly by https://randomwordgenerator.com/


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My Liquid Half

I'll meet you at home,
for a regular old session,
after some time with you,
out comes my confession.

My faithful, dear old partner,
slender neck, body sleek,
fill the crevice in my soul,
without you I am weak.

You peel away my pains,
bring some ease and rest,
a night without you in hand
is a torturous, enduring test.

I never made an agreement,
to part with alcohol.
No one could bear to see me
in my desperate state of withdrawal.

There can be no censorship,
of the trying emotional mess
that my whole life becomes,
if I resist giving an easy, 'yes'.

And if I don't much feel like a drink,
I'll often breathe it in as a mist.
Spray it and inhale real deep
hold it in so I can't resist.

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If you like poetry, why not check out some of my content for some inspiration.

Here ya go, enjoy!

Check out my previous poems!
1 - Moonlight Butterfly
2 - Dandelion Seeds
3 - Abberation
4 - Thief's Song
5 - Queen of Tranquility
6 - Ascension Over Grand Symphonic Omega
7 - Sail into the Sunset of Life's Final Conclusion
8 - Kiss Goodnight
9 - Antique Jewelry Box
10 - Offering to the Seas
11 - Mary-Jane's Trees Shade my Day
12 - Darkness Allure
13 - Groggy Morning
14 - Magical Rite
15 - Hero's Cape
16 - Flavours of Pain

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A very meaningful poem. I write poems too.

Thanks for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed.

Maybe link me a poem.

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Good stuff man, you've got a way with words.
Its cool you let the randomness inspire you :)

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