[POEM] - Ascension / ♪♫♬ Grand Symphonic Omega ♪♫♬| CREATE EPIC POEMS

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Ascension Over ♪♫♬ Grand Symphonic Omega ♪♫♬


For aeons man has sought ascension,
a trial and tribulation for the ages.
Endlessly toil for an ancient great labour
Handed down by tried old sages.

For all there is, and all there will be,
there's more than plenty to go around.
Heed the wise lessons of these teachers,
reverberations of the First Great Sound.

Shake loose that dense molecular facade
and put to bed those clung childish fears.
come experience the love, warmth and awe
all those come before you bask after and revere.

Existence is a vibration, a stern denial of Null,
All there is leaves behind an undeniable wake.
You're a harmonic ripple between dimensions,
upon which the very Universe has a stake.

Child of the Realms, go forth and seek the light,
bask in its' glory and receive of its' quintessence.
Spend a while in presence of a calmed mind,
render forth a greater you who'd bow in your presence.

You are limitless, eternal souls all but caught in a web
and the Great Sky Spider is everywhere, occupying your head.
The weave is a wicked pathway connecting the Worlds,
dangling from the World's Ceiling keeping the Spider fed.

In this life there is death, the Grand Symphonic Omega
all crescendos begin ready seeking their ends.
Seek out the bounds and limits of this World
and return to us someday soon, to recount it with friends.


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You've made it! That deep poem is very awesome. How do you do it? <3

Thank you. I was feeling right and took extra time.

My pleasure. Oh yeah, I have heard if we were in a right time or we was feeling right, we could create the best crestion, wasn's right?

Beautifully written and love the subject matter and content.. Well done. Use your gifts to benefit and educate mankind.

Hey, just do what you are inspired to do and you can't go wrong.

Not only a deep and poignant visual, but wow, way to make poetry like 100x harder by using all those 100 syllable words!

Complex, compelling and with a smooth finish.

This will age well!

Thanks for that, @SirCork. You ever heard of the Cosmic Spider God?
It was worshiped by many peoples in the ancient past and is still recanted of today.

Cannot lay claim to awareness of this god. Sounds a bit spooky! :D

Pretty sweet...are you sure you aren't published!

Thank you! I'm considering penning many more and maybe releasing as a book. :)

Loved it! I like these lines the best...

reverberations of the First Great Sound.

In this life there is death, the Grand Symphonic Omega
all crescendos begin ready seeking their ends.

upboated my friend :)

Thanks for the feedback. Appreciated greatly!

nice lines.. good one .thanks for sharing with us.

Have a great day!

You too! Much love! Cheers!

Such a lovely poem, I am a musician and I struggle to write lyrics sometimes, I have previously collabed with another steemit poet on a song if you would be interested in something like that let me know! 🍑

Absolutely! That would be fun to be involved in @juliakponsford.

Which poem did you have in mind?
I linked to my current ones at the end of the posts.

Or should I write something new?

It is indeed majestic poetry.... Love this like among others..
You're a harmonic ripple between dimensions,
upon which the very Universe has a stake.

I Love it

Yay! Thanks! ":)

So awesome, much pleased, Have an Up-Peach. <3

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