[Poem] Grey mind
My mind is grey,
Just like the sky above me,
I have to many thoughts,
To listen to them all,
I dare to ask a silent moment,
To catch my breath is all I want.
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*I wrote this one in a rainy day. I was going to work. My mind full of thoughts. Heavy. I thought that I was just the beginning of a poem, but I've decided to leave it like this. We have a saying in Romania: " essences are kept in small bottles". The essence, not the length is what makes a good poem.
Did you like this poem? What was your favorite part? Please let me know in a comment below. Thank you.
I'm writing poems on a daily basis. Here are my latest ones:
- Locked heart
- I'm tired
- Flash poems 3
- Upside down
- Opened gates
- Feelings in my chest
- Before I fall asleep
- Contemplation
Wonderful!
It is a wonderful poem, I would have liked to be longer