Toothache Part 5: The Glasses (5 minute freewrite)

in #freewrite8 years ago (edited)

Ok @mariannewest, you asked for a part 5, so that is what you have.

The original trilogy was about a man's fear of going to the dentist. He turns to the dark side when he is scared (Kylo). However, the man he wishes to be is Austin Powers. He thinks the dentist is "a bit of alright." He tells her (without the drugs) and he gets a very nice surprise.

Part 1 Dark Side Of The Tooth
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/the-dark-side-of-the-tooth-5-minute-freewrite

Part 2 The Toothache Awakens
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/the-toothache-awakens-5-minute-freewrite

Part 3: Go With The Flow
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/dark-black-5-minute-freewrite

In Part 4, the author just cares about getting paid. Out character Kylo / Austin makes a very boring trip to the dentist. The author ends the story by looking for inspiration by the beach, which he does get eventually. However, this is not inspiriation to improve the story.

Part 4: The Fourth Toothache
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/the-fourth-toothache-5-minute-freewrite


Part 5: The Glasses

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Part 4 was awful. The writer of the story decided that he no longer cared for his character and had run out of ideas. He wrote a story anyway because he knew he'd get paid.

But now he had feelings of regret. He had another brainwave on the beach. “Let's do what George Lucas does and move it forward a generation. People won't complain that much because it is not Star Wars.”

This time Mr Powers was in need of glasses.

Actually, that is not true. He has to go back to the dentist.

“That's cheating man,” says Austin Powers. “you just lied about needing glasses so you can cheat the prompt.”

“You assume too much,” replied Kylo.

But there is always one good thing. “The dentist; she's is a bit of alright.”

Mr Powers arrives at the reception.

“Hello, you can go straight in,” said the receptionist. “I'm off home for the weekend.”

Mr Powers walks in, where he is greeted by his wife, some food, a bottle of wine and two glasses.

“Happy anniversary darling. Ben and Rey are staying over friends for the night. Shall we take these home?”

I wonder if Kylo was right and you assumed too much.

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I hope you enjoyed my freewrite. It would be a shame if the author ran out of ideas for Part 6.

Task
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-95-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-glasses.

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Keep up the work! I'm sure you'll be able to come up with something for Part 6!


I took a crack at today's #freewrite prompt (Day 95 - Glasses) as well! I'd love if you checked it out! Let me know what you think =)

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mkkenny13/dailyfreewritechallenge-day-95-glasses

Very entertaining, I will have to go back and check the other episodes.
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Yes, my time is short at this present time, but I'll always do the daily 5 minute freewrite. So fun.

Nice story bro!

Hehehe, thank you @sherylneil

What a toothful episode! 😛 I'd suggest a small summary of the previous ones everytime .. That one about Lucas is so true hahah!

Thank you for your advice. I have added some plot summaries to this one.
:-D

For some reason, this series of freewrites reminds me of a dirty old man walking around a park with nothing on but a raincoat. 😮 🙄 🤔 😃

He's not a dirty old man, who's a geek who's mind needs to escape the horrors of the dentist. Hehehe. Except, now he's an older geek. Part 6 could be tonight, but freewrites never go to plan.

Ha ha ha, I didn't mean that literally lol, he's a writer who walks up to you and flashes you with the prompt and then walks away lol. 😏 😜 😄

I sure hope that the writer is not running our of ideas!!

Never :-) He's too crazy

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