The Fourth Toothache (5 minute freewrite)
Another toothache and another trip to the dentist. The trilogy was already complete, but there was a shortage of money and ideas. That is not good. If we have no ideas, we can't make money. If we can't make money, we'll be less rich. Therefore, we'll take an old idea and pretend its new.
It is a new toothache. Kylo is hurting. Time for the dentist.
“Name?” asked the receptionist, who then decides to put her hand to his face. “Your Jedi mind tricks won't work on me, boy”
Kylo doesn't know what to do, or say, at this point, but he knows the author of this story will get paid.
He sees the dentist, again, and says hello, again. Nothing too exciting, he sits there and gets treated, again. The conversation is far too boring to print. The author is getting even lazier, but he knows he'll get paid.
Whilst the story is being typed, the author decides to go sleep. It is a nice long deep sleep.
He wakes up the next morning, and walks to the beach to see if he can get an idea. The sounds of the waves are calming. Perhaps, this will inspire an original laugh out loud moment.
Eventually, an idea comes to the author. The moment of inspiration has arrived.
“I think I'll write a part 5."
Picture taken on my Lenovo K5 Plus smartphone on 22nd December 2017.
I kind of hope you enjoyed my freewrite; as long as I get paid.
Task
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-93-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-fourth
Great style of writing. The toothache got me to read. Looking forward to the next part.
I read your post about religion about half hour ago. It is brilliant.
Thank you for reading this one.
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HAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Thank YOU for the belly laugh!!!
I loved this and how your mind worked :D
:-D Thank you. I was extremely tired last night, and this came out. Then I went sleep at 9pm.
Ha ha ha, nothing new to see here folks, just pay me and move along please. That was great and it brought a smile to my face this morning. It is hard when you want to post something to really stimulate and give your readers a "Wow" moment every day, but there are just going to be those days when your own mind is drawing blanks or is somewhere else.
Thank you, I'm glad it made you laugh. Now that the new prompt is here, perhaps that could be part 5.
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:-D
I’m the purple banana squirrelfish herald of Marianne for today. Here’s the most recent prompt:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-94-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-a-kiss
Yes!! Get on to part 5!! maybe write it when you are awake? i know @f3nix wants us all to sleep and write, but it is sooooo hard lol
I did wonder whether to do Part 5 using the "a kiss" prompt. It is inviting, but I wrote a true romance story instead. It is the more challenging prompts that bring out the best freewrites.
Ok then, because you requested it, here is part 5.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/toothache-part-5-the-glasses-5-minute-freewrite
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