Black Star
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6 years ago in #contest by tristancarax (66)
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You're too hard on yourself, this is a great piece! You showed well the frailty of the human being in this battle between supernatural powers, and taking the point of view of the doomed officer was a good choice. Tip!
Had to take a break for a few days.
Ya, I tend to be hard on myself.
Thanks for the tip! Very kind of you.
I think that your frustration is normal, not always we have the needed inspiration.. there were so many ways to develop this: the relation between Xarag and the Queen, the true nature of the so-called Angels, the curse of the armor, a flashback on why Xarag has been "gifted".. the hints are scattered and part of the game is spotting them ;-) I liked your story full of action.. just keep trying your pen and the improvements will come, this is a place to improve on the creativity side more than just a contest. Cheers!
Your presentation is creative I follow you, you are a very creative person, hope you always give us a good job and be with us. Thank you very much.
Thanks for your kind words.
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Greetings, brave storyteller!
Finish the Story Contest - Weeek #21 is out, crispy and warm, for the first time on the Bananafish blog!
Dear banana fish,
Since I am your recent #1 fan, could you rig all the forward contests so that I "magically" end up in the top 1 all of the time?
Thanks Bananafish. You are awesome.
hahahaha
Congrats to your successful hosting of this contest.
Sorry, but I see you only as a friend.
Bwahahahahah!
You're awesome too, we all wait for your story!