Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #21

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A contest with a pot of four ONLY FOR THIS WEEK, FIVE @steembasicincome shares? You're in the right place!

76 @steembasicincome shares awarded till now through the contest!

Prize categories:



1st place : n. 2 3 steembasicincome shares
2nd place : n. 1 steembasicincome share
Popular jury : n. 1 steembasicincome share (remember to vote your favorite!!)


Welcome in the realm of the Bananafish!

Twenty-one weeks ago (it’s more than five months!) The Master Word Alchemist @f3nix started this wonderful adventure on his account and, with the help of everyone, he's pursueing it like a philosopher's stone quest.

The “thing” has quickly become bigger since then, resembling a cuddly and puffy Dunwich Horror in the attic.

Now, it’s the first time that this contest is hosted in the blog of @bananafish, this (not too) mysterious benevolent entity that loves and cares for all the friends who enjoy themselves to participate.

For celebrating this "passage", the first prize of this week is increased to 3 steembasicincome shares, for a total of 5 steembasicincome shares up for grabs!

@marcoriccardi took care of the first part of the story you will read, a short dip into a fantastic-surrealist setting, with some elements that could stimulate reflections and parallelisms, or bring to action scenes. Feel free to follow your creativity and good luck!


Things that please the Bananafish mighty god!


  • use the tag #finishthestory.
  • vote, vote, vote your favorite story!
  • Try to post your story the earliest possible and not at the last moment.
  • Sustain, comment and upvote each other as a true group of friends and fiction lovers.
  • Respect the 500 words limit.
  • Post in your blog instead than in the comment section.
  • help our contest & workshop to grow by giving it some visibility.

And now.. let's introduce today's story!



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The Border


In the scant shadow of the guardhouse, a greenhorn Border Legionnaire was waiting for the end of his first watch shift, gasping for the heat.

Below him, there was the stretch of sandy desert that the XIX Floating Fortress patrolled incessantly, moving back and forth in the sky like a surreal and phlegmatic cetacean, with the low and incessant buzz of the managems that powered it.

Behind the line of Fortresses, the Lands of Man ideally began. In that marginal strip, there were meager pastures and stretches of scrubby bushes, attacked for miles and miles by a fine sand, like yellowish talcum powder, that made the desert gain extension every year.

"This year the wind has put so much sand down," the marshal told him, biting a gray mustache, one of the last days before the Duty Beginning ceremony. "And behind the sand, the Those arrive".

He was glad he no longer had just a stunner to defend him from the Those, like the guardians of the border in former times, before the Legions. Once, it was thought to direct the Those into reserves to prevent them from doing too much damage with their insatiable hunger, but then they started to run away, to strip the flesh off every head of cattle, to waste fields and orchards, to devour even the people... and more and more came from the desert.

He had been among the first in his draft class in combat and shooting exercises, but in his heart he was afraid of when he would found himself in front of a real That, and not an illusory image created by the trainers. It took him months to get used to the slouching and snappy movements of those lean and black illusions, all teeth, which he found horrifying.

During that first day of service, however, only an armored convoy had passed, transporting ordered and dull clusters of goleminers to the mysterious and vital mines of managems, on the other side of the desert. The Those did not find goleminers edible, luckily.

The Horn of Danger snatched him cruelly from his thoughts. Intruders in the fortress! How did they get in? How did they pass under our noses?

He grabbed the heavy terminator and ran down the spiral staircase, toward his team's collection point, his heart in his throat.

A scraping noise from a corridor to his right made him stop. Pointing the terminator in the dark, with a trembling grip, he shouted "Who goes there?!?"

The Those came out, completely different from the illusions of the trainers...



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Join the fun! Here is how this contest works:


  1. An unfinished fiction story or a script is posted.

  2. You finish it with your own post or a comment in the comment section. A limit of 500 words is recommended.

  3. YOU WIN! four five @steembasicincome shares to the writers with the best ending.

ATTENTION! RESULT POST CHANGES TIMING!
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The result for Week #21 will be out on the SAME POST OF WEEK #22 CONTEST,
on Wednesday 25th July, 1:00 PM, GMT -7 (Pacific Daylight Time).
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Submission deadline: Tuesday 24th July, 12:00 PM, GMT-7 (Pacific Daylight Time).
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So, this time you have one more day for posting your entry!



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Bonus: a special banner for the all the participants of at least 5 editions!


If you're among the braves, feel free to save this banner and use it in your footer!


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If you like this contest..SPREAD THE GOSPEL! I'm grateful for your resteeming and word of mouth. Everything helps to grow together!

GOOD LUCK, BRAVE STORYTELLERS!


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Here comes the super pixie dixie!

Hello @pixiehunter! So happy you're back again!

Why thank you kindly. :)

I...must...get..this story out of my head.....Tis' a good time to return.

We both took a break but we need to get back on here.

The Pixie strikes back! It's indeed a good time my friend 👍

We wait for you both with trepidation!

Always fun writing with you all. My last week of my scheduled posts. So going to take my time posting next week as I find a new routine.

Here's my entry:

https://steemit.com/bananafish/@cyemela/finish-the-fiction-story-contest-week-21

Cyrus is in the house! You broke the ice! C'mon, storytellers...don't be left behind!

So many entries to read so little time!!

This contest has been placed in the Steemgigs Contest Channel which has over 5000 members and will be presented in a compilation post on the weekly Talk with Terry Show is every Sunday 12:00 AM Manila Time/ 16:00 GMT 0 Time Zone.
I will endeavor to join all contests left there or at least make a small upvote and add on the compilation post.

Steemgigs Contest Channel link
https://discord.gg/ajnWGxJ


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Thank you very much, @maverickinvictus! Your support is precious! 🤗😎

Thank you Mavs! We have great news coming btw..

ohhhh you got me intrigued!!!


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A crossover..yeah!

You have my highest esteem for this!

LOL! You crack everybody up!

A great beginning that has just left me reeling in the aftermath of a heady fever cast by the hand of a horrific muse. I'll publish tomorrow after a chance to recover from the nightmares that are knocking on my nightly door. Ha ha, coming over all Poe-esque. Might have to retire to the plutonian shore.

Peace to the @bananafish I shall try to bring you back a raven steed!

Poe-esque is really appreciated! My heart is beating in expectation...can you hear it from under your floor? ;)

Great beginning @marcoriccardi + @bananafish It inspired a bone tingling fury of writing last night. I have only just recovered and am now shivering in my duvet sitting on the couch and drinking coffee wondering what went wrong!

But enough of this jibber-jabber, here is my entry:

Borderline Madness
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Just squeaked in again with my entry :)

Your squeakings are always a melodious sound to our ears, @calluna.

With a name like @bananafish, we just had to stop by and upvote this, even if we're not participating in the writing exercise (this week).
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I bananas we trust, my fellow! We should partner :-P

‘Tis time to dance with the actual hosting account for once? Hmmm... a fine promising one at that.

..let's see what kind of dance this is!

"We'll see about that."

Welcome @stever82 to the contest and our ever-evolving community of brave storytellers!

Welcome @stever82! Nothing delights Bananafish friends more than a newcomer storyteller!

Thank you I had fun doing this and will try to continue.

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