You're too hard on yourself, this is a great piece! You showed well the frailty of the human being in this battle between supernatural powers, and taking the point of view of the doomed officer was a good choice. Tip!
You're too hard on yourself, this is a great piece! You showed well the frailty of the human being in this battle between supernatural powers, and taking the point of view of the doomed officer was a good choice. Tip!
Had to take a break for a few days.
Ya, I tend to be hard on myself.
Thanks for the tip! Very kind of you.