I think that your frustration is normal, not always we have the needed inspiration.. there were so many ways to develop this: the relation between Xarag and the Queen, the true nature of the so-called Angels, the curse of the armor, a flashback on why Xarag has been "gifted".. the hints are scattered and part of the game is spotting them ;-) I liked your story full of action.. just keep trying your pen and the improvements will come, this is a place to improve on the creativity side more than just a contest. Cheers!