Are You Okay?
Are You Okay?
Your eyes speak louder
than your words,
your smile is rare beauty
I get to see,
and when you say that
you are okay,
your whole world seem to
falling apart.
But you don't show it or
tell it to anyone.
You want to fade away
as someone's dream,
you want to hide in the dark,
you want to run away
but still stay here.
and even after
knowing all this, I
just ask you,
"Are You Okay?"
Last Seven Days Poems :
- Dont Believe.
- It will Come Back
- Stay.
- I am Sitting on a Bench for Two
- Breathe Believe and Never Give Up
- Don't Show Me
- Lights and Hope
Your poem is very intuitive and hit the feeling right on the head. I really don't know what it is that makes us say we are okay, when we are obviously not.
It always feel great to hear from you. Thank you so much 😊
This is definitely accurate. :) Nice piece.
I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much 😊
Nice poem. The reality it expresses is something i can totally relate with. Particularly the fact that some know it's not okay but still ask all the same. Great job!
Thank you :)
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