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Cont. from Page One – You politely introduce yourself and accept the graciousness of Astra

A friend in need

You accept the heart felt greeting of Astra.  

Seeing your unease she directs you thoughtfully towards a nearby boulder to sit and rest.    

The rock is cold and hard, but you welcome the chance to sit and regain your strength.

“You must be confused about where you are and how you got here?” says Astra, motioning to your surroundings with expressive and hypnotic hand gestures.  

“Well this place of ruins around you, was once a great city in this land of magic we call the realm of light” says Astra in a soft voice 

Mesmerised, you sit and listen a moment.   

Astra tells you about the realm of light and describes its inhabitants of magical beings in past tense. She explains that they all once happily living here under the rule of her kind and powerful master, someone she simply refers to as the sorceress. She tells you of a great war, led by an evil and radical wizard, a war eventually leading to great destruction and the end of the sorceress’s successful rule. 

You wonder if Astra will ever stop talking, but you simply sit and listen on.   

Astra finishes her story, telling you that the evil wizard, upon defeating the sorceress, seals her power into a magical pendant. Finishing his evil deed, he also entraps her in a magical prison, before going on to roam the land unchecked, causing destruction, death and pain.  

You sit shocked and wonder where the story is going and why you are so enchanted by Astra's words

“Now, you must wonder where you come in and how you came to be here” Astra says now staring at you, eyes bright and filled with hope.  

 “Well… I managed just enough magic, to cast a spell to seek out someone special from a different dimension and bring them here. Yes, that someone is you!....You see, only a non-magical creature from another dimension like yourself has any chance to sneak undetected by the evil wizard and steal the pendant back, so I really need your help.”   

Astra’s posture suddenly changes, she seems nervous and begins looking about as if being watched.  

“Something is not right and I must leave, quickly before I go, please take this” says Astra extending her now shaking hand towards you, holding out the gift of a tarnished ring.   

You stand up from your stony chair and take the ring, you attempt to slip it on a finger and find it’s a perfect fit. 

“You will find your way somehow, I just know it! And when you do find the pendant, grab it, tap this ring twice and I will materialise to take it from there.” explains Astra in a now rushed and somewhat panicked voice. 

With this Astra nervously looks about, turns and walks a few steps backwards before vanishing before your eyes. 

Within moments you are startled to hear a loud pitched screech from overhead. 

Staring up into the coloured sky above you spot a fabulous winged creature flying towards you.   The winged creature seems to see you and falls into a dive in your direction, it looks massive and very mean. 

It’s time to make a decision again and this time quickly!


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Option 1

Retreat from the screeching creature, moving deeper into the ruined city in a hope to find cover

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Amazing idea, having us choose how the story continues!

I voted my favorable option ;D

You have yourself a new follower, love this! :D

Thankyou, greatly appreciated! I really hope you enjoy & others like and follow as well.

Yeah, it's an endless struggle to bring in more people to interact with...

If you've checked my blog; I'm writing stories based on ideas other users come up with.. Whatever they may be; very loose, or very silly even :p... But the problem is, I can make a post specifically just to get some ideas out of people, and perhaps I will have one person comment ;/

It's hard to reach new people and have them comment and upvote and talk and all, but once it does happen, it's all worth it haha :D Met some amazing people so far, and I'm looking forward to meeting more. :D There are some amazing writers (or other content creators) out there, that are in the same wagon as you and I... Our time to shine will come, no doubt ^^

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Option 2

Find a nearby branch, wave it like a weapon while crying out “For Freedom!” thus showing this realm who’s the boss.

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Love it, can't wait for more.

Hi @lordnigel, I like this post, very interesting. 🤗

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I love this @lordnigel! The art is your own? I really like it, perfect illustration for the story. I need to go back and read part one but I was able to jump right in and make a decision here, clearly I want to explore the ruined city (I am a Dungeon Master after all...)

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Thanks you so much for your interest and positive comments. I originally started to write this to be published as an e-book in collaboration with my excellent illustrator friend KD.

The pic's are all original and have been drawn per spec, to match the story exactly as needed and I couldn't agree more, that she has done a fab job!.

The best post to start with is: https://steemit.com/writing/@lordnigel/an-interactive-story-for-steemit-readers-you-choose-the-path-by-upvoting. It will give you additional background as well:)

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