2 Sentence Horror Stories: The Breaker (Original Story)
After the electricity had cut out upstairs in the offices, I got a text from my boss to go down to the breaker and reset the circuits; I was surprised by how fast he had messaged me.
As I walked down the concrete corridor underground, the lights began to flicker and I saw the phone on the ground smeared in blood, then the corpse of my boss smashed into the electrical box with his head twisted nearly off, torn limbs hanging out, pieces of skin littered beneath and clumps of hair and fluids on the walls and ground; at that moment as I began hyperventilating out of sheer fear, the lights went out and a massive set of muscular hands wrapped around my body, crushing my ribs broken, bones ripping my lungs in gashes, with a guttural, deep growl saying, I am the Breaker...
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Oh my god. Way too scary. I hope i can sleep tonight haha. I am not joking. Keep it up!
Thank you very much, I actually just wrote this right before I go to bed now at 4:14am lol it is late. It was a quick bit of fun but I am glad it scared you. I hope you can sleep too! Get some rest!
Yes mon! Best tag line at the end, I love the play on words haha. That last part is the longest sentence in existence lol. Don't know how you came up with that. Maybe attributed to your rapping skillz?
Thank you very much bro, and just a lot of reading, writing and practice. You can never use too many commas and semi colons :) I am an English major, so grammatically correct sentences were ingrained into my brain. A sentence can be an entire book length long if structured properly haha but that simply is Overkill
Shudang man! Ya that was my issue in my previous entry. I was pretty sure it was just two run on sentences. Still most impressive skillz brotha!
It's all good bro, I still enjoyed your entries. And thanks a lot
Bro haha 107 words in the second sentence! That has got to be a record haha! Maybe it's just me, but I'd rather deal with something I can punch rather than ethereal horrors that could phase right through me. Great hook though!
Haha, this horror was indeed physically manifested, it would break you one day :) Speaking of breaking, yes it is a record possibly, but it is indeed a detailed packed sentence to deliver the punchline. Glad you enjoyed this one!