ShortTens #3: Waiting | 10x10 word stories by @ahmadmanga
~Short Tens~
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Salam (peace)
Hi everyone, I'm ahmadmanga... a hobbyist Gamedev who likes to draw and write stories....
A few days ago as an exercise for my English writing. I wrote few 10-word stories and people liked them... So here's the third set the 10-word stories I'm writing... I don't know if this or the first set is better but at least I'm trying.
Previous Sets: #1 Love and Hate - #1.5 StoryCubes Special - #2 Happiness
The Theme This Time Is: "Waiting"
Also these storis have the word "wait" in them.
Special thanks to those at PAL fiction-workshop members especially @jrhughes for correcting my Grammer, and teaching me about the use of exclamation marks!! I mean I should avoid using them from now on.
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LiNE
This line is long, I've waited my turn for hours.
Resolve
I'm tired of waiting, and I will not hesitate anymore!
Meeting
Sorry for the wait, wasn't sure what dress to choose.
Fangs
Like predators, be ready and await the chance to attack.
Employee
You won't get promoted if you only sit and wait.
Forever
But she says she'll wait for me, she'll wait forever.
Promise
Did you forget our promise? I waited for your message.
Turn
Just make your move already!! What are you waiting for?
Summer
Spent the summer days waiting for something exciting to happen.
Well
fell in a well days ago; waiting for a savior.
So~ what is your opinion?
Did you like these stories? Do you think you can improve one? if you read the previous set, how do you think this one is compared to it? looking forward to your comments!!
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