Fiat iustitia, et pereat mundus || may justice for groups, never deny it for individuals - a poetic interpretation

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2nd February 2019

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@trumanity,

Tru ... beautifully written!

Those last two stanzas where you break into Verse ... are perfect. I re-read them 6-7 times. Not only is your poetic craft itself excellent, but the imagery is extremely potent.

Grew tall the cowering conscience of the captured souls
Unbridled bats defiled returning to our honoured cove
Dividing scraps with greasy hands, red loot-soiled sand ...

Very well done, old friend.

I vote this poem as No.1 for Daily Dose.

@madevi @angelveselinov

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My friend, I want to break out in verse more, but I fail really. It feels like such a tension between crafting the words into verse, against potentially losing the word choice. I should have used pen and paper for this one - that usually gives me more confidence to experiment.

Thanks so much for the encouragement - it means a lot.

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Thank you for reading, my friend.

Love your great piece really

And thanks for your commendable comment on my poem earlier

Keep writing!!!

The pleasure is mine, my friend.
I'm happy you liked this -keep writing too.

Thanks a lot!

Really glad to have you on this platform, @trumanity

it's tragic 😐
it's why i don't believe in any leadership at all. greed will consume individuals.
decentralize everything.

That is a statement showing wisdom right there! Although one shouldn't have any illusions - it will take generations of (class) struggle. No faction let's go of the control it currently has, without a fight. They may enter with a PR team, give the old system a nice spray painting - and the public will fall for it. It takes time ;-)

Thank you for taking the time to stop by, my friend. Stay warm - it's getting chilly out here.

oh for sure it won't go without a fight. but eventually governments would have to let go because they'll have no other choice. you can't control decentralization. it's basic freedom and democracy. once enough people start trading goods with crypto it's game over. old governments will still be around, like power companies and military and telecom etc. but most other nonsense will be brought down. it'll get to a point where they'll have to beg for your taxes. it's not the matter of if, only when.

stay warm man. steem on.

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