How it felt like? (An Original Short Poem)
That was what
falling out of
love felt like.
It was like a reading
a book and coming
across a quote,
or listening to your
favourite music
and fathoming the lyrics
and then look
up at the ceiling.
And all of a sudden
You can't relate
it to anything
or anyone.
And that's it.
It all just ends suddenly.
Last Seven Days Poems :
- Could I have you here, forever?
- Are you Okay?
- Dont Believe.
- It will Come Back
- Stay.
- I am Sitting on a Bench for Two
- Breathe Believe and Never Give Up
nice lines. keep it up
Thanks.
Beautiful poem as usual @mindfreak. I composed a little piece of music for you on "Dont' Believe" it is in the comments and on my blog. Hope you enjoy.
Cheers,
bucky
Thats great.
It feels amazing when work of mine retouched by artists.
Its an honour.
Thank you so much :)
My pleasure @mindfreak I love your work. It is easy to connect your words to the steam-of-musical-consciousness :) Your work is a pleasure to play off of.
Cheers,
Bucky
Great message in few words, you used the true beauty of the poem.
@mindfreak
very good job.
Thank you @qagiri