Giving Poetic thanks for the Musical Collaboration of @rusty-jernigan and @d-pend for the unmixed feat. ~ Corners of the Mind
{Reciprocity In Poetry}~ for Corners of the Mind, (Unmixed Feat) You can hear this magnificent masterpiece of work here: https://steemit.com/dsound/@rusty-jernigan/corners-of-the-mind-unmixed
Music That Impacts My Soul
I push my mind to describe the experience That this musical ….composition had on me
It came bringing a other world euphony
No longer scattered now I’m centered
As the music massaged me back to
A place of balance and harmony
The consonance played my heart strings
Like a symphony in concert that conjured up in me a rebirth.
The acoustics drove my blues away
It was the 12th of December, 2017 Filled with toccata and sonata, Oh Happy Day!
I had DNA explosions from hearing the sound.
Of a fresh form so lyrical, gave birth to miracles.
The notes met me in higher realms Of my sacred garden that is spiritual.
Music filling me with the energy of love that’s so reciprocal
The melody ain’t your every day beat typical It transformed me.
I went from reckless to untrusty,
Now back home again,.. Thanks to the collab music and lyrics by @rusty-jernigan
I went from pondering and contemplating my life’s end,
From a world of make believe, wearing the mask as I pretend
To colliding with the collab melodies and lyrics of @d-pend
Because they came with the antidote to my misery
At first, it was too dope to take it all in.
And then the piece embraced the corners of the mind
The namesake of this unmixed feat
This music that removed the veil from me
And in clarity I walk on high and between realms and raindrops,
Dancing with my dreams on rooftops globally
Living life to the fullest all the way through.
As I make it do what it do.
Music that made my hips move.
Music that made me dance in public like nobody's watching.
I was not ashamed, of those that stood by and wondered what came over me.
As the music streamed forth hitting my solar plex
Causing an Electromagnetic thrust to my apex,
Kundalini flowed UP, UP, Up
I got so high I felt like a Jedi.
Ready to put the Sith Lords in check.
Letting them feel the music until they show some respect.
The lyrical messages hit the core of me.
Like passages from the Bible
In and outside of me it created a spiral.
Lifting me above and beyond being bothered, in a tetrahedron,
Lyrics that made me remember I was tribal,
As I caught glimpses and visions of the motherland
I put the app on repeat and grooved all day long.
Retweeting, resteeming and sharing with the message “You got to hear this song.”
The neighborhood became unbridled
By noon the compilation had gone,
From city to city, nation to nation
It caused a global meditation, that went viral.
Birthing epiphanies of keys codes and wisdom for survival and revival.
And the music flowed on…. To the corners of the mind
In real time, creating a new paradigm.
That unlocks the encryption codes and ciphers of the true-true of life
And the dream, the real,…reality.
That connects us all universally,
Mind to Mind in sync.
Remembering to always Mine our mind for the treasures of our soul
For we are the gold, and those who know will let their inner light shine.
Altering our destiny, as we make a course correct,
As we connect with The corners of the Mind
RenSoul17 OUT!....Drop the mic......
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@rensoul17 I'm incredibly impressed by this sublime word-flow. I've been sitting here parsing the rhythm and bopping my head at the incredibly humbling content you've expressed here!
I feel the ripple effect of your resonance, and it warms my heart fully!
Sending all my love continually!
Oowee that was dynamite and then some!! Ima need more people to upvote this bomb piece. Great work, I feel it to the core like music to my ears!
Oh Wow, your reply is all I needed for my hours of hard work on this one. Thank you so much for your heartfelt emotional response. I receive it as spiritual medicine @daqueend, thank you. And yes please do rally the troops.
It’s my pleasure that I was able to uplift you and show you appreciation on a well-thought out piece.
@daqueend Did you get my gift in your wallet?
I surely did! Your gift made my day! I’m still new and properly learning the site but I will surely return the Steem love soon enough! Thank you so much
This piece is awesome! I love the rap like feel.
Hey, @wandrnrose Oh I love it when you visit, makes me feel so special. I worked on this piece most of this day, I was digging deep because the two people that this post is dedicated to are like my sons, they both have a big part of my heart and we have never met face to face and all three of us are spread out in different parts of the country, so I know I can show love with my words and that was my intention with this piece I am glad you like it. Have a great evening.
What a beautiful story. You are special. I'm happy to be a witness of your special relationship to these young men.
It was the 12th of December, 2017 Filled with toccata and sonata, Oh Happy Day!
I had DNA explosions from hearing the sound.
Of a fresh form so lyrical, gave birth to miracles
--Great line!
I'm no judge of poetry, least of all its structure (how it's "laid out")
But I know a great line when I see one.
love it!
Ahh @carolkean, so good to have you visit my space and leave a reply. I am honored. You may not be a judge of poetry but you are awesome at what you do. You are one of my role models. I am on your page often. Thank you for your comments. it's like the cherry on top. Have a great day and Happy Holidays!!
I'm not a fan of how its laid out... to have to scroll so much to get through the text and follow the pattern of it.
Your hard work has shown... Maybe do a video of yourself reading your poems... to display your true feeling... people love visuals.
You are bringing me confirmation. I know its time to do videos and I promise you I know that will make all the difference. I got two books coming out this month, I am editing 24/7. But before January I will have a video out and I will remember you and let you know its out. I appreciate everything you said. I am still learning how to format. I have not got it right yet but that to will get better. Your feedback about the constant scrolling that interrupts the flow was a masterclass statement for me and I will fix that. Thank you so much @paulmoon410
Just have to do it with the same soul you script your words with. It'll all be OK. If you want I'll take one and speak it. Just let me know.