I Need To See You (A Poem by Ren)

in #inspiration6 years ago (edited)


I Need To See You
As a curator, a builder, a moderator and an agent of change.
I need to see you.
Not the excuses or the "you" in the shadows behind the mask you wear.

Not the, "putting others first "always...
That you comment on.
Yet you continue to say you do this and you do that.
I need to see you.

I need to feel the air you breathe
I need to experience the raw talent of your creation
That’s making it happen in the now
What is it on the real that you actually do?

I don’t need you to point out what others did or they're ‘just released’
Or what happened to him and her umpteem years ago

I need you to rise up and be not afraid
To step into the spotlight
And quit fearing whether you will get it wrong or right

And I need you to remember
That the best of us that can be likened to the rest of us
Have fallen down, got said no to and have been rejected
More times that they could care to remember.

But these are the great ones that took the “no’s” and rejections
Transmuted them into fuel
And ate it all like a Scooby snack
And then they bounced back.
Shook the dust off their feet
And They kept stepping until they stepped into
The day where they arrived.

They have paid their dues, made many mistakes
And it's understood that they may make bad choices in years to come
But they keep their head up and they keep showing up
To make it do what it do
And so should you.

By the way, what is it again that you really do?
Where is your brand, what should I remember you for
If you are in music don’t you want to if not walk in the ranks
At least walk in the footsteps of the great ones?

It is not serving you to sing background for the rest of your life
When you were born to be in the spotlight.

And I am writing to you because from way over here
I See Your Greatness.

And I see that you have been absent from
Hitting your mark, but just because you are late don’t mean its over.
Start today, Catch an epiphany and lay out your blueprint
Start with what you got in your arsenal
With a knowing that everything else you need will come.

As you open one door and then two
The universe will show you what else to do
And you will be sent the angels, the assistants, the workers,
the interns and the students, mentors, the muses and the guides
That will surround you.

So be not afraid to rise
Take off the mask and quit holding up others
That’s doing pretty damn good on their own

Love and believe in yourself enough,
To raise your head and lift your gifts
And be that light that comes forth in this reality
Doing only what you can do the way you do it.

There are pre-appointed fans, followers, students, and givers,
seed sowers and sponsors, waiting and earmarked just for you
They were born to be apart of your journey
Can we please see YOU?

Thank You For Reading. Please Keep Coming Back and All Comments Are Welcomed.

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I need to feel the air you breathe
I need to experience the raw talent of your creation
That’s making it happen in the now
What is it on the real that you actually do?

What an amazing poet i need to see you, i need to feel the air you breathe what an emotional part of the poem...it makes me to remember who i have seen for a long time, the mask on her face is the distance. Such an emotional lyrics in poem...what a great and true poem @rensoul17 it is much amazing i really love it...

Thank you @franklinolas, thank you for reading.

Always believe in yourself 🔝

Yes!! @vassileva...Welcome to Steemit!!!

Beautifully said, Ren.

I am doing my best to live it, to let my music through, and to allow myself to be seen. Scary, for this quintuple Scorpio, but vital.

Scorpio's are very gifted and they make stuff happen and often times they have a magnetic energy that draws others as well as what they need to them. Thanks for reading and commenting @cresendoofpeace. I just took a look at your blog, love what I see I am following. I am from Tennessee also , Memphis. Nice to meet you.

Cool! Nice to meet another Tennesseean, even if I am a transplant. ;-)

We're about five hours east of you, on the Highland ridge and thus at a higher altitude, and colder as a rule. But my mom's dad was born and raised in Ripley, just north of Memphis, so I have Tennessee roots.

In fact, his son, my mom's half-brother, recently told me that on their dad's side, we are descended from Timothy Demonbreun, the "first citizen of Nashville," so I got a kick out of that. Who knew?

I've been enjoying your posts for a while now. You are a very gifted poet yourself. Be blessed!
Cori

More rad stuff! I have been enjoying your poetry all week.

Thank you so much,@asonintrigue it means a lot coming from you. Thanks for reading.

I love the kitty seeing a lion in the mirror! The pictures all illustrate your poem very effectively, and the poem is quite uplifting. Well done!

A really special piece, @rensoul17.
Reading and assimilating is a challenge. Sometimes it can be very complicated for people to make themselves known in their own expectations and only show themselves through actions in favor of others.
Sometimes, more than we want, we have very gray days.
May peace always be with you.

Thank you @armonia for reading my post. Know that you are in my spirit and my heart in a good way. You and I have a lot more talking to do. You stay strong.

It's nice to know that you can understand my limited command of the language.
Thank you very much @rensoul17.

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I think this part speaks to me in multiple ways:

I need you to rise up and be not afraid
To step into the spotlight
And quit fearing whether you will get it wrong or right

I have always struggled with expressing what my heart desires. I often think about the readers and not myself. "What if they don't like my pieces?" "What if I am not good enough?" . It is difficult to show the real you when all you see are the judgments, the discouragements.
That's why I am very excited to be a part of the @tribeglobal-love . After fulfilling the requirements soon, I know I will be part of a loving and encouraging community.

I am waiving the entrance donation, please @reewritesthings please join us. I will be posting our new weekly schedule today. Thanks

There’s an exasperation and tough love, here—a seeing, knowing, and an egging on...

Interesting post, Ren, especially since I sent you a piece earlier tonight, titled The Mask.

Thank Yahia, coming from you it means a lot. You know i have these mini celebrations everytime you read and comment on my post. and when the words are so few like they are above it makes me savor each word slowly. These are the kind of comments I want to transmute to the calligraphy art I do and put on the wall. I also did a response just now to The Mask, All I can say here because there are really no words is BRILLIANT!!!!!!! Thank You.

Bless you, dear, you make my heart smile 😊 Glad you enjoyed the piece & I look forward to reading your response. Brave New Week, Ren. 🙏🏼

I so much love this. It inspired me because lately I have been struggling with my muse to write and at some points- I doubted myself and flawed the genius within.

Yes, there is greatness in every soul
Your message lifted my heart rensoul
My fingers now harmonize with my pen's steps
Leaving each lines with emotoins of words

Yes, we ought to live out our greatness
Shine our light and let out the brightness
Live our truths with no double standards
Savouring the extremes of our abilities
While yet we breath

You touched and played my heart strings with this poem, thank you for the unexpected gift @rexdickson

You are welcomed. And this also inspired me to post a poem about it https://steemit.com/writingimpact/@rexdickson/struggling-with-my-muse.

I am grateful for your post.

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