Spring Flooding :: Haiku of Japan #98

in #haiku7 years ago (edited)


􏰍􏰎􏰏􏰈􏰐􏰑􏰒􏰓􏰃􏰄􏰔􏰕􏰌雪とけて村一ぱいの子ども哉
yuki tokete mura ippai no kodomo kana


snow melting
the village overflows
with children


—Issa
(Tr. David LaSpina)


Hokusai - Snowy morning at Koishikawa from 36 views of Mt Fuji.jpg
(Snowy morning at Koishikawa by Hokusai)

This is one of my favorite haiku. There is a playfulness as it tells us the snow melts and the village overflows then quickly resolves any suspense by delightfully telling us this is not a flood of water but of excited children, eager to play outside again after a long winter of being stuck inside, and eager to stomp in all the wonderful puddles from the melting snow, no doubt. Stomping in puddles being one of the great joys of childhood.

I have written often in this Haiku of Japan series about the misfortunes of Issa's adult life: the death of his wife and kids, his poverty, etc; but I haven't covered his childhood. It may not surprise you to hear that his childhood was also full of misery. His mother died when he was only three. His father remarried, but his stepmother hated him and made his young life hell. He was forced to work instead of going to school, and she made him leave home at fourteen.

Yet despite all his misfortune, he always saw the joy in life and remained a playful boy at heart. In spring the village overflows with children, and I'm sure Issa was right there with them in his heart playing and enjoying.

Footnotes

†: The Japanese is literally "fills" with children. The sense however is one of filling to the brim, packing so full it can't fill anymore. With the suggestion of the kids going to play, I think in English "overflows" fits the scene better.






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It's quite clever. I would agree - overflows seems to fit better than 'filled' or 'brimmed'. It also creates more tension and more excitement. Unless you hate children, than it's a total tragedy!

Beautiful one. And as always, I love your reflection on it, really makes me connect to it even more. Thank you!

This is the best suspenseful break ever! Great find that "overflowing". The sense of flooding lingers on to momentary catch your breath in fear that thousands of children have been drowned. Very effective, for the joyous laughter of those children playing in the first warmth of spring is all the more livelier once you catch up to the actual reading. Suffering seems to have designed a brilliant poet in this case of Issa, but you do not lag far behind.

Lovely feeling 💕 I love haiku and other things Japanese :) Following..

I love the image. Thanks for posting.

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