219 Day 5- Minute Freewrite- Prompt: A Special Occasion

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Day 13 - Selfie Freewrite Celebration Contest!


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This is my entry for the Day 13 - Selfie Freewrite Celebration Contest - Prize 84.819 SBD, hosted by @freewritehouse.

You can also choose today’s freewrite prompt by looking at this post. Weekend Freewrite - 5/26/2018 - Single Prompt Option, hosted by @mariannewest.



It was a special occasion for his mother to stop by for a visit. He loved it when she did. For the visit she would always make his favorite chicken noodle soup. It would take her hours of boiling vegetables and chicken. The entire house would smell for hours of the wonderful, flavorful concoction.

Herbert knew that time had been running out for his mother, and each visit was treasured more than the last; knowing that it could be the last. It was a bittersweet experience. But she reminded him that every time we spend with other people could be the last, and that we just don’t think of it like he does when he thinks about her.

“I’ve lived a long-life Son.” She would say and somehow that made him feel a little better. Still, he couldn’t bear the thought of her leaving him. Instead of thinking this could be the last time, he talked about the future. “Next visit Ma, you should bring some of that fresh Italian bread I like so much.”

Those words made her smile. He knew she didn’t want him thinking sad things before her time ended.

Ding!

Thanks for Reading!

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This is such a lovely story! Every moment spent with a loved one should be cherished. Have a great weekend too Simgirl!

We should really savor every moment we spend with people, we never know it might be the last. And that selfie is cute by the way, you're lovely @simgirl

You are right!!!! You never know what will happen. Thanks for reading!

You're welcome

Awww. this was so bittersweet. Great story. It made me smile through the aching heart.

Thanks! I didn't know it was going to take that turn!

What a sweet mother/son relationship!!! And it is hard when you have aging parents and you don't know if you see them again.

Hoping that you are having a wonderful day!! Of course, you want to write!! We knew that and here is your next prompt 😘

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-220-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-mice

Thanks @mariannewest! I have been thinking what to do with mice!!!! I certainly don't want to find any real ones for the selfie!!

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