New House~
Hi Everyone!
This is my Day 112 - Freewrite: Prompt: see photo below made by @the.artist-98
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The House
Once again I was finding myself in the darkest of places this time with my trusty blue light. Thank goodness for Grandma's that know about old houses and how the lights keep going out.
I remember the day, just like yesterday, maybe because it was?
She came to see my new house and she talked a bit, pulling out of her purse my new flashlight.
She shook it around in the air saying a few words that kind of creeped me out.
I asked her if something was wrong. She replied, Now it will all be just fine! If you ever have any trouble while living here, make sure you have this flashlight with you!
Grandma must be losing it, I thought.
Then tonight, the storm came like one I never saw and all the lights went out.
I grabbed her flashlight and while checking the breakers in the basement I saw a flash from the corner of my eye and shined the light on it.
I'm not sure who screamed louder, the Demon or me!
Maybe tomorrow I will start to look for a different house..........
Happy Writing!
Much Love,
Snook
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Thanks for sharing! Could you imagine actually confronting a demon face-to-face in your basement?! Talk about terrifying!
Check out my response to today's #freewrite and make sure to upvote/comment! I wrote a creepy tale about a man going back to a childhood spot to find something lost by his brother.
Thanks for stopping to read my story I'm happy you liked it but next time could you please leave your freewrite Add off of your comment? I asked very nice the night before and as I don't lie, please stop.
I enjoyed this, a little fantasy piece that made my evening even better. Thank you for sharing this with us, it is really nice.
Sorry you are having a bad evening :(
You are so sweet and go through and read everyone's freewrite and always leave wonderful comments! I'm so happy I could make your evening even a tiny bit better! hugs
This is an amazing way of making me imagine how everything went in this story. It scared me. haha. I always believe that imagination is much scarier than the thrills and scares brought by movies. And you have a great of stirring my imagination.
"I grabbed her flashlight and while checking the breakers in the basement I saw a flash from the corner of my eye and shined the light on it."
Woah! wait. Run!
Oh my! This is super scary. I wonder what kind of special powers that flashlight has? I really enjoyed this and that the image is so adorable.
I don't know LOLLL today the 5 minutes went way to quick :D I might have to come back to this one and see what happens! I'm happy you liked it!!
Lol, oh my this could almost be an inside version of mine. :-) Held my breath when the lights went out. :-)
Thanks :D I loved your freewrite too!!
:-) Thank you
HaHa! I sure wasn't expecting a demon either. Happy house hunting! LOL!
Thanks :D I'm so happy you liked it!!
I don't think you should hang out with @f3nix anymore!! Your writing is getting scarier!! LOL
Well done!! And a screaming demon!!! 😱
HA!!!!!!!!! you cracked me up!!
This was quite scary. My heart was beating faster and I was tense - even though I could kind of tell what is going to happen: something bad!
Horror stories never end well... I'm not sure why the demon screamed. To scare you - or because you scared it? haha would love to think that you scared a demon! (like how mice are afraid of people who are in turn afraid of mice)
Thank you for stopping and your wonderful comment!!
this was what I was thinking in my head :D
I just didn't want to commit to that and call you 'scary' in a comment... I don't want someone that scares a demon to haunt me!
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Thank you for making me laugh!!
I like it. Thanks.
Thank you for stopping to read and comment!! means a lot!!
Wow! What an ending! I didn't expect that at all! Great job!
Thank You <3 hehehehe this one was fun to write! I'm happy you liked it!