The Shed - An Old Steemians Home Story

in #freewrite7 years ago (edited)

Last week, @omra-sky created a story featuring a few of the freewriters living together. Since then, we have shamelessly moved in and are running wild! (Here's to hoping that he doesn't charge rent! 💰)

If you haven't read any of the stories yet, I highly recommend that you do. While each freewrite can stand on its own, there is a grander story arc developing. None of us know exactly where this is going, and that's what's frightening fun! The links to each (click the images) are located at the bottom of the page.


The scent of primrose on the evening breeze flirted with the kitchen curtains. @Fitinfun was slicing up jicama and idly listening to the occasional words that would drift in from the deck outside. Twice, her knife had paused, the words "tighter" and "distraction" steering her thoughts to a winter day, a red scarf, and the lock on the shed out back.

Her terrified screams fading into a wet gurgle. A horrific singed odor of charred flesh... That god-awful high pitched electrical hum before....

Footsteps pounding in the hallway jerked Fitinfun from her memory. Through the doorway, @Brisby and @F3nix rushed and skidded to a halt, flush-faced and panting. Held between them, a squirming mass of something was rolled in what looked to be the rug from the front door.

"The Captain?" Brisby questioned, voice thin and desperate.

Fitinfun's knife shakily pointed at the deck where @Deaconlee and @Omra-Sky were having their discussion. F3nix and Brisby rushed with the rug out to the deck and into the yard, both yelling "Shed!" behind them. Scrambling footsteps hit the deck as the two men rushed to follow.

Through the kitchen window, Fitinfun watched as the Captain took Brisby's place holding the rug. Omra-Sky unlocked the shed door as F3nix called to what was inside, "Hey Ugly! Surprise coming to you!"


Previous Old Steemians Home Stories

Images linked to post


The Old Steemians Home by @omra-sky


Flash! Day 66 #freewrite by @snook


Old Steemians Home Christmas Eve by @brisby


Old Steemians Netflix Ep 12:
The Waiting by @snook


Just a Pillow by @f3nix


Children's Games by @f3nix


The Old Steemians Home:
Omra's Tale (Part 1) by @omra-sky


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For the Weekend Freewrite Option Prompt - Surprise Coming To You by @mariannewest.
Thank you for bringing us together and for all that you do Marianne!

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Much like Dr. Frankenstein I created a monster I can no longer control. I love it!

I'm happy that you liked it! (And seriously thrilled that you aren't charging rent...) Let's see how far this creation of yours goes!

Hey brisbina, you can't leave us in suspension like this! Well, technically you can. I noticed with pleasure that here I am a "normal" character .. it's good for a change! Scrivi davvero molto bene 😉

Grazie per complimento @f3nix! As for "normal", I wouldn't get too used to that feeling! 😉

I soooooooooooo Love this!!!!!!!! ALL of it!!!!

Great Job brisby and everyone!!

Yay!!!! @snook loves it!! I am so glad! By the way, I got a peek at the FABULOUS basement that you made for @f3nix! I want to live there soooo badly!! Thank you for reading this Snook!

well then you and he have to become.............Vampires sorry to say LOLLL

and.......I LOVE reading your stories :D

will not be writing my weekend one for a bit so trying to stay away from teh feed so just happy I saw yours and omra-sky's posts!!!!

So...@snook wants a vampire @Omra-Sky and @brisby? Just us or the whole gang? I'm happy that you read our stories!!

no, just you and @F3nix..........in the basement.......in the caskets lolllll :D

see 2 caskets.....so we needed 2 Vampires lolll

Oh and I found his saber parts......https://steemit.com/weekendfreewrite/@snook/the-old-steemians-home-omra-s-tale-part-2

Gotcha! You want bloodsuckers?
Bloodsuckers you shall have! Again, LOVE the basement!!

well they can eat this fruit from a tree too so they don't have to feed on humans loll

Hmm..Vampire Fruit? Will do! (You just don't want @f3nix and I to turn the home into an all you can eat buffet... 😋)

I'd say it's a crossover between a rain forest and a mystical crypt mmh..

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<> okay......I'm having problems finding our comments loll so I'm starting a new thread here LOLLL

<>soooooooo BIG question.....do you want your bedroom IN the house or the Shed? up to you but I kind of need to know LOLLL You seem to love your shed but the house's bedrooms are pretty cool too............so let me know....the boys are going in the basement lolll<>

Never mind LOLL you are going in the house...I have other plans for the shed loll

Ha! As much as I love the shed, I think the house is a good place for me. Besides, I have a coffin that I'm supposed to be sleeping in now. Well, at least sometimes. LOL Lovely work Snook!!

I love this :D

Thanks! I couldn't keep it light for too long! Want to join in? I'd love to read your addition. Snook and I will need someone to shoot dishes with...

I will bring my own gun!!!! <3

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