#Fiftywords: Ages Apart (Tiny Story)
In his dreams. He finds himself in the same empty space, without any color or sound.
My second entry in one week to @jayna's #fiftywords challenge, I didn't find any rule disallowing multiple entries and I like this prompt. "Space." I got the idea for this one before my other story... So here it is, enjoy:
Ages Apart
No colors, no shapes, no feelings, total void.
He asked for something, but every time I couldn't hear.
"You're taking the wrong path."
I was talking to my younger self.
What do you think?
I LOVE titles that make you think again after reading the stories of them, I tried to do that with this title. Did I succeed? Hope to hear your thoughts~
If you liked this story you might like my other entry "Big Fat Space" or my other #fiftywords stories like "Backyard", "Broken by Avalanche" & "Mothers last Chocolate."
Yes you succeeded; it makes me think...
Thanks for reading and commenting, glad you're the first real comment today.
Hey @ahmadmanga
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I don't think it's a good idea to put a link without saying anything about my story, in your first comment to me. (seeing that you spam that link makes me want to not click it.)
Yeah I like upvotes, but I like to see more opinions on my stories, what's your opinion?
wow very nice post
Nicely done, @ahmadmanga! Wouldn't that be great if we could talk to our younger selves, and tell them a thing or two?
Yeah, I always wanted to do that. Haha...