A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 19) - The Hours Between 2300 and 0000

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This is a continuation of the Steemit-exclusive, original novel A Day in the Clouds. Be sure to check out the previous chapters to catch up with the story. Enjoy!


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The prison cell became stuffy real quick. With Mamie moist, the air in the room became very humid. Soon, it became a chore to breathe.

The giant was slow to get up, her eyes still as glassy as melting ice. Night time had a way of weakening my titanic adversaries. Unfortunately, it had a way of weakening most other creatures as well, save for the children of the night. I wasn't one, but I try to not let the changes of the atmosphere affect me.

With the giant's strength powering me, I felt my viento surge through me. I almost felt the same way as that time I carved out a crater in the back of the compound. Could it be that I was able to reabsorb some of the power that they pilfered from me? If that was the case, then it wasn't the giant powering me at all.

    "I love you, Ledd," Mamie muttered in an almost exhausted tone. "You know that, right?"

Isle la view? What could it have meant? Was it the name of the prison? Why would she even say it out of the blue? Isle la view. The words themselves meant something individually. But, when strung together, they didn't make any sense. Perhaps, her drunken stupor caused her to abruptly lose her energy.

I looked at her, confused, and replied only with a smile and a nod. Whatever "isle la view" meant, I'm pretty sure that it's something important. Or, I could be wrong and it could be totally useless. It could go either way, or both ways at the same time. Time, as they say, will tell.

Sweat trickled down my back, and I could bear the heat no longer. I walked towards the rectangular vent that normally spews cold air. It seemed like after years of use, it had ceased to function. Kicking it didn't seem to help in bringing it back to life, though it did draw the ire of the giant.

    "Ledd!" she scolded. "Don't do that! You might break it."

Break it? That means it wasn't already broken. If only I could find a way to bring it back to life, then it might help in getting on the giant's good graces.

The giant was slow to get up, and the heat was quickly becoming intolerable. I didn't know if she felt as uncomfortable as I did, but at that point, I couldn't care less.

    "Isle la view," I whispered to the rectangular vent, hoping that it was some sort of password to get it to function. Sadly, it wasn't, and Mamie was almost on her feet. I had to act swiftly.

I raised both of my arms, and lowered them slowly to form a semi-circular pattern in the air. My right hand thrusted diagonally to the left, I traced the same circular pattern on its descent. My left hand followed half a circle's perimeter after. The ground shook, and I felt my viento surge like it did in years past. As my left hand joined my right, I focused my viento in the space between them.

Carefully containing the tremendous force, I shaped my viento into a spherical armas. I leaned back, and slid my left foot in a semi-circular pattern going to the back. My right knee folded immediately after. This was a reparacion tecnica. The elders used it whenever a mechanical device wasn't functioning. With the giant's force powering me, I figured I could use it to relieve me of this smoldering atmosphere.

This was the first time I attempted this, so I might have botched a few steps. I was nervous of letting my armas go, fearing that it might result into another crater. It wasn't a terrible thing if that would happen, but I would certainly incur the wrath of my titanic captors.

I felt my fingers trembling more the longer I held my pose. Lurching forward, I threw my armas into the rectangular vent and hoped for the best. As soon as my armas hit it, the rectangular vent gave off a robotic tone and came back to life.

    "It worked!" I exclaimed. I turned towards Mamie, surprised to see the giant amused instead of angry. It seemed that I learned more from the elders of my village than I imagined. If only I could teach other species how to harness viento. Even if we don't share the same bloodline, I could carry on the practices of my people, and forge my own legacy. "Did you see?"

    "That's very good, Ledd," she said, clasping her hands. I wasn't quite sure if it was sarcastic or if she was genuinely delighted about the feat. Her face seemed to point to the latter, but why would she be delighted?

Was it because they were hoping I would regain the full extent of my powers? It made sense if they wanted to siphon it in its entirety. Did she lead me placing my lips against hers so that I could charge up? It was all very confusing, and a flurry of other questions rushed to my head.

She sauntered out of the prison cell, closing the door behind her. I hurriedly trailed her, not wanting to be locked inside.

The frigid air was always biting whenever I was the only one in the room. It's like they were torturing me using the glacial temperature. As a Sachaphoyan, the cold mountain air was but a norm. Although, ever since my imprisonment here, I became averse to chilly environments. It must be the humidity of the low-lying plains. My body adjusted so that I can bear the smoldering temperatures.

My viento strengthened my every step and carried me as I ran. Literally walking on air, I slipped out the door, as it was about to close. My left foot got snagged on the door, and I fell on the wooden floorboard.

    "Oh, Ledd!" Mamie yelled. She grabbed me by my arm and helped me to get up. "Are you alright? What happened?"

    "I-I ... I'm alright," I replied, waving her off. I was onto her tricks, and I wasn't going to let her subject me to that freezing torture once again. Maybe that's why she doused me with the water treatment. The water increased the efficiency of the cold air torture. "I'm okay, don't worry about me."

The ones who should be worried are you and your kin. I stood up, and brushed myself off. It took a special kind of patience to restrain myself from unleashing my enhanced power. But, if that's what's needed to enact my improvised plan, then so be it.

    "Dadier," Mamie called out. "I'm going down to fetch Eddie, watch Ledd, okay?"

Dadier put up his right hand and acknowledged the command without speaking. The gesture might have been a pre-discussed sign of confirmation. Or, the giant telepathically replied to Mamie. If only I could figure out their hand gestures, then maybe I could improve my communication with them. Considering they don't understand the way I speak.

I put my augmented viento to good use by directing it to my brain. Not wanting to waste time, I busied myself in trying to figure out how I could make a weapon out of these trinkets. There must be some way that I could get a weapon like Ayesa's. I couldn't accept that it was handed to her just like that. What, with the destruction it could create? There was no way that the giants would be so careless, even if they've successfully turned her to their side.

From time to time, Dadier slid his mobile throne to see what I was up to. Whenever he felt like it, he would stand up and play around with what I was making. It seemed like he was crafting something of value. But, it might be that he was distracting me from seeing the true potential of the trinkets.

I was careful not to assemble anything that had any semblance to a weapon. The last thing I wanted to do was to risk rousing Dadier's suspicion. Hours passed and I still couldn't make any sense of them. There must be a pattern, but I wasn't sure where to start looking.

With my augmented viento running out, I decided to turn my attention to Dadier. I went inside his station and, as expected, he lifted me up onto his lap. The giant changed the display of the computer into a series of moving pictures. It wasn't the same hypnotic nonsense that the teevee displayed.

The information that the computer provided was substantial. With the help of my viento, I was able to digest every single morsel. Dadier's close watch prevented me from looking at details on how to tinker with the trinkets. But, I had to take advantage of the opportunity afforded to me.

I turned around to face the giant, scaled his craggy abdomen and grabbed hold to both of his cheeks, as well as I can. He looked confused, and his eyes crossed as he tried to meet my gaze. I placed my lips on his to absorb his energy. The giant didn't flinch or resist my advance. Barb-like quills that protruded his chin abraded my skin. I didn't care about the pain. The reward heavily outweighed the cost. I felt his breath on my face; it was searing, like the steam that emanated from the caps of the holed mountains.

Dadier carried me, as he stood up from his throne. He set me back down where he sat, tousled my hair, and walked outside his station. The ground shook fiercely with every unhurried step he took.

    "You be good now, you hear?" he remarked as he bid goodbye.

And, just like that, I had gained full control of the computer. With it, I had access to the giants' global surveillance network.

    "That was easier than I thought," I whispered, grinning.


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As always, a great, entertaining read. What will he get up to on the computer and how will that play out?

And then underneath it, the deep sadness from the complete lack of understanding of each other. Not knowing if that will ever change.

I missed you on here, my friend! :D I'm happy that you were able to fit this in your busy schedule. I've been writing the final SILVER LINING and SPOILER ALERT you get a shoutout :D

I was so torn when I was writing chapters like these. On one hand, you're happy that "Ledd" is succeeding, but when you think about the big picture, the giants aren't winning at all. This whole story is my way to help relieve some of that sadness. Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts, my friend :D

Friend, I loved the way you used the word VIENTO. Like the force that drove you. As always dear jedau a pleasure to read you! I send you a big hug and I hope you have an excellent Thursday!

See! I told you I'm using Spanish heavily here. You'll see when you come around to reading the story. I did liken it to the Force in Star Wars somehow :) Have an excellent rest of the week, brother! Thanks for stopping by to leave your well wishes :D

My friend really surprised me but I loved how you put it in your novel. My mother lives in a place where the wind is extremely powerful and you made me remember that. A pleasure my friend!

Ohhh nice! I'm glad it had that effect. Purely unintentional (or is it? ;/ )

This and the next chapter up is one of my favorite sections, and I am so clumsy bro

"My viento strengthened my every step and carried me as I ran. Literally walking on air, I slipped out the door, as it was about to close. My left foot got snagged on the door, and I fell on the wooden floorboard.

"Oh, Ledd!" Mamie yelled. She grabbed me by my arm and helped me to get up. "Are you alright? What happened?"

"I-I ... I'm alright," I replied, waving her off."

This scene is like everyday of my life lol I'm constantly falling and knocking things over or breaking things, it is not even funny.

Great chapter as always

Glad to have you back on here in the comments section, brother! Definitely interesting to hear from someone who knows how everything turns out! haha Me personally, I'm not at all clumsy, so I can't relate to how you guys are feeling. Hold on, let me just readjust the splint for both of my legs...

haha, nice joke, and yeah, you know I've been crazy busy, I still haven't caught up with @dreemit's novel or @ezzy's new stories!

It's truly a life sore but it has its funny moments. Just recently I did something very dumb while cleaning. Needless to say I should slow down for sure. I'll probably write about it in peacemaker since I write about whatever there anyways for more insight about random topics.

Definitely catch up on their stories post haste! I don't know when @dreemit's posting Book Two, but you better finish Book One first so you get caught up. @ezzy's new stories are da bomb as well, definitely carve some time for them.

believe me I know and I'm doing my best, lol thanks for the added pressure

Well, put in a 110%!!! CHOP CHOP!!

Hahaha just kidding, bro. Their masterpieces are just there waiting for you when your schedule frees up. Some things just can't simply be rushed :D

True, I would say they would get better in time as they marinate in the distance, but that would only happen if they were continually re-editing all the material before I had a chance to read it. lol I hope to be caught up by next week for sure.

Like fine wine, brother. Like fine wine. Maybe you'll be in a different, calmer headspace when you get the chance to read them. Who knows. Sometimes it's just all about timing. I was just fortunate when you read mine and you liked it. Maybe if you read it now you wouldn't like it as much (minus the edits, of course)

Isle La View, haha, I'm always thinking about words and how they can sound completely different depending on how you 'hear' them. That's one of the things I love about Ledd and relate to.
I also love that something always seems to happen when he focuses his viento, it makes me think of meditating on intent and sending it out into the universe, which truly does have power I believe.
Another excellent chapter my friend, these people have become so familiar to me it's cozy to read it as well as exciting :)

That's been one of the fun things that I've been able to explore during the series. I had thought about having Ledd think that way as well (using misplaced words) but I thought that it might be too confusing. Would be a convenient way to excuse typos and grammatical errors though. Drat! :D

I also love that something always seems to happen when he focuses his viento, it makes me think of meditating on intent and sending it out into the universe, which truly does have power I believe.

You're on to something here, sister. Indeed, that was my intention. And, yes, I do believe that sending those thoughts to the universe have that kind of effect.

I'm so glad that everything feels familiar to you now, my friend. Wait 'til you read the next chapters ;) Thank your for your continued support :D

I look forward to it, and I will always support you my friend!

OR you can read it in advance ;)

Ooh he's getting stronger! The plot thickens! The action intensifies! What to do with this newly recovered power?

Ahh child he's so clueless it simultaneously hurts and is adorable XD And now I can't wait to see what he gets up to on the computer.

As amused as I would be to find out he's downloaded a virus or accidentally hacked the FBI, I'm expecting it's as simple as finding Diego videos XD

ps - I was thinking of when you were saying you were thinking about a self-insert taking Ledd for a ride in Coche and letting him know he's understood, well I was recently thinking of a friend who used to have to take her kids for rides in the car at night so they would go to sleep, maybe you could do that for Ledd and everything will be better in the morning and the Sachaphoyans will rise again XD

Ohoho! Indeed! So far, we've seen little Ledd without his powers, but what would he be with it? I really enjoyed writing his "drunk with power" phase. As to whether or not it will last, we shall see. We shall see.

I like where you're going with this, my friend! Awesome suggestions :D In reality, he really get jumpy while riding the car, so he's not like those kids. Come to think about it, your friend had it worse in terms of getting her children to sleep huh. I can only imagine the nightly routine. When my sister was younger, she couldn't sleep when we're staying elsewhere. They had to put her to bed inside the car. Maybe it's the airconditioner that lulls her to sleep haha!

Thanks for taking the time to leave these great insights, my friend! I appreciate very much :D

He climbed the craggy mountain and now he it's in, what havoc will he wreak now that he has the keys to the kingdom!!

Mwahaha! Absolute power corrupts absolutely. I definitely enjoyed writing Ledd drunk with power. I can't say too much without spoiling anything, but yeah, things aren't as rosy as it seems. Plot twist!!

Thanks for stopping by, dude! :D

I love a good plot twist, will be watching avidly!!

*gulp * And then the nervousness slowly sinks in :S

Isle la view? What could it have meant? Was it the name of the prison? Why would she even say it out of the blue? Isle la view.

Oh Lord! 😂😂😂😂

Hahaha! Ignorance is bliss, as they say. Too bad they're only talking about the one suffering from it, and not the people around him haha! Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment, brother!

Excellent work dear friend @jedau, I admire your power of creativity and inspiration, excellent work congratulations, thank you very much.

Thank you for your compliment, brother! Means a lot, I appreciate it. Thanks for stopping by and for enjoying the read :D

It's a pleasure my friend, it's a beautiful job
Have a nice day

Have a wonderful day as well, my friend!

What a chapter, my bro!

Little Ledd is growing in his powers and about to overthrow the "bourgeoisie"! Go, Ledd! As I've mentioned time and time again, you exude pure class. You've delved deep into the mind of Ledd and translated that vision to the written word so well, we can pretty much physically experience the world through his eyes for ourselves! That's genius, man!

Now I gotta see how the rest of his cunning plan to escape unfolds. Nobody can deny he sure is a bright spark! A job extremely well done and I'm just sorry that this intriguing spin on reality has to come to an end.

A master class in transitive perception.

Steem on, my brother! :)

I just tried to write something that has never been seen before. I'm just glad that awesome people like you are appreciating it, brother! When I started this journey, I just wanted to give Zepp's life justice, but it turned out to be so much more. I've enjoyed the ride, and I just hope that readers have enjoyed it as well. Thank you for the kind praise, my bro! Your encouragement is always a welcome sight :D

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