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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 19) - The Hours Between 2300 and 0000

in #fiction7 years ago (edited)

Ooh he's getting stronger! The plot thickens! The action intensifies! What to do with this newly recovered power?

Ahh child he's so clueless it simultaneously hurts and is adorable XD And now I can't wait to see what he gets up to on the computer.

As amused as I would be to find out he's downloaded a virus or accidentally hacked the FBI, I'm expecting it's as simple as finding Diego videos XD

ps - I was thinking of when you were saying you were thinking about a self-insert taking Ledd for a ride in Coche and letting him know he's understood, well I was recently thinking of a friend who used to have to take her kids for rides in the car at night so they would go to sleep, maybe you could do that for Ledd and everything will be better in the morning and the Sachaphoyans will rise again XD

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Ohoho! Indeed! So far, we've seen little Ledd without his powers, but what would he be with it? I really enjoyed writing his "drunk with power" phase. As to whether or not it will last, we shall see. We shall see.

I like where you're going with this, my friend! Awesome suggestions :D In reality, he really get jumpy while riding the car, so he's not like those kids. Come to think about it, your friend had it worse in terms of getting her children to sleep huh. I can only imagine the nightly routine. When my sister was younger, she couldn't sleep when we're staying elsewhere. They had to put her to bed inside the car. Maybe it's the airconditioner that lulls her to sleep haha!

Thanks for taking the time to leave these great insights, my friend! I appreciate very much :D

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