Work In Progress...some improvement / 少し上手になったかも

in #art5 years ago (edited)

Oops...I was kind of disappearing again haha XD
It’s been a busy first half of my week.
I was drawing a little everyday but I didn’t have time to finish/post or think about what to post.
Today, I decided to put aside what I have to do and make a post!
Sorry...my to do list...you’d have to wait XD

The photo below is what I’m working on right now.
You might recognize it because it was the piece that I drew about 5 months ago.
HERE is the post.
I decided to work on it again because I didn’t know how to add shading very well back then so I left it not quite finished.
I’ve been taking some lessons how to draw/colour digitally, I thought I could use this drawing to try out what I’ve learned so far.

あら…私ったらまた消えそうにw…4日ぶりの投稿です。
今週はなんだか月曜日からバタバタと忙しくて、お絵描きは少しずつしていたのですが、仕上がるわけがなく…
ネタもない!
それでも今日は、私のやることリストにはちょっと待ってもらって、投稿することにしました。

下の写真は、今、私が描いているイラストです。
5ヶ月ほど前に描いたものなので、見覚えがある方もいるかと思います。
その時の投稿はこちら です。
今でもそうなのですが、なんと言っても影入れが苦手で、思うように仕上げられなかったイラストです。
最近お絵描きのレッスンを受けて、デジタル塗りがちょっと分かってきたので、練習するのにちょうどいいかなと思い、掘り出してきましたw

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In the lesson, I learned to draw cleaner lineart.
The photo below is my 5 months old lineart.
If you zoom, you can see how messy it is.

お絵描きのレッスンでキレイな線画の描き方を覚えました。
下の線画は5ヶ月前のものです。
ズームすると、線がヨレヨレしているのが分かります。

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This is new me!...I mean my new lineart!
I’m very excite to see the improvement.
Although...I should have used finer brush...I thought it was finer but hmmmmm....
This is done with G-pen size 4 on Clip Studio.
If any of you have advice I’m more than happy to hear.

こちらは新しい私!じゃなくて新しい線画!
自分の上達ぶりにびっくりですw
けれど、もう少し細いブラシで描いたら良かったかなぁ〜
細くしたつもりだったのですが、う〜〜〜む…
これは Clip StudioのG–ペン サイズ4です。
何かアドバイスがありましたら、よろしくお願いします。

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And this is my old drawing! Gahhhh!!! Scary! Hahaha XD
When I drew this 5 months ago, I thought it looked good but noooooo!!!! It’s scary!
Especially the way I added shading.
Why didn’t anybody mention me about this? LOL
Anyways, I’ll keep working on.
You never know...the piece that I’m working on might look weird 5 more months later haha

そしてこれは前に描いたものです!ぎゃぁ〜〜〜こわい!
5ヶ月前に描いた時はまあまあの出来だと思ったのですが、何ですかこれ?こわい!
影の付け方がこわいです。
なぜ誰も指摘してくれなかったのか?笑
とりあえず、頑張って仕上げようと思います。
今描いているイラストを見て笑う日も来るのかもしれませんが…w

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いつもありがとうございます!

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Hello @djynn
this is really beautiful art my friend...
i like your art...

I’m glad you like it.
Thank you!


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Thank you!

I think you are doing super well, @djynn!!! I love your lineart, and the new lines are so delicate and lovely :D Also I like the colours so far :D The skin is shaded nicely and softly and I like the hair and the flowers <3 <3 <3

Keep at it! I always look forward to your posts :D

Thank you so much!

Ahhhhh~ I haven't posted anything for the past 5 days, I think... Too busy with work, but I'm getting some days off this weekend, so I hope I can make some posts... <3

I like both drawings, sis... Since I don't know how to draw digitally... hahaha~ keep it up! ^^

Omg...there are so much to learn and I only learned the basics so far...
I’m having trouble applying it to my own style as well :(
I’ll keep it going though...thanks sis!

We all start from that, sis... Your efforts will definitely pay off... Just take care of your health, too. :)

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I really like your delicate boy with flower :D. And even better now that you redraw it in Clip Studio. Advice for lineart? Hmm, mine is also pretty messy, but work in a high resolution and then shrink the finished result will make the lineart looks prettier, I think.

Ah! Higher resolution!
I was kind of not liking my lineart going pixely...I don’t even know if that is a right word...when I zoom. That’s great to know. Thank you!

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Thank you!

Coloring is most pleasing :-)

If I know what I’m doing XD

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A great job! It looks so wonderful like it has just come out from the best anime cartoon!
You have said your previous works are scary, but, to tell you the truth, i don't see why:) for me they look fine too, but maybe it's because of my lack of knowledge in this sphere, better to say total absence if knowledge:)) i dont see any disadvantages, so for ordinary readers the work is just wow!
People who can draw digital pictures were always like magicians for me, I wanted to study it, but I didn't believe I would succeed.
Is there any connection between real painting skills and digital painting? So if I cant draw in the paper, can I draw such a nice anime boy in the PC?

Thank you so much for your comment!
I think it would be easier if you already have a skill of drawing on paper, especially colouring.
I’m new to drawing...about 3 years...started drawing on paper with pencil and ballpoint pen, and moved on to digital drawing about 6 months ago. Colouring is very new to me so I’m very confused XD
If you want to try some drawing on pc or tablet, there are many interesting drawing apps you can get. It’s fun ;)

3 years?? oh, you're not a beginner already;) if 3 hours - then yes;))
I feel great interest to painting and different techniques now, and I was so surprised by some of them! For example, I never could imagine that colous in painting are more important than forms. The colour can show emotions and transfer the idea bette than just the form even if it's perfect. Or intuitive painting! Absolutely amazing! The kind of painting for those who can't draw at all;) oh, it's the special world ... and that's why painters for me are magicians, and you too!;))

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