노고지리 수직 상승하는 하늘 아래
사랑하는 사람 이름
맘껏 부르고픈 봄날은 너무 짧아
은하의 강에서 별꽃놀이 하는
길 잃은 별 하나 새 이름 지어 불러 봐도
적적 막막 대답이 없다
첫사랑은 하늘의 별따기
몇 날을 우러러 고유한 이름 지으려다
짓지 못하고
마음만 담은 신토불이 호칭 하나
나의 사람
내 사람
내 삶
그 별은 가슴에만 박혀 있어
내가 불러야
그 별에도 봄이 오는 일장춘별이여!
@hansangyou, your post is a breath of fresh air! The poem "First Love's Star" paired with those evocative images of the sea and the lake… simply stunning. The longing and intimacy you capture in your verses, the way you rename the lost star as "my person, my life," resonates deeply. It's beautiful how the poem suggests that love is not just about finding a star but creating one within ourselves. The imagery is powerful and complements the poem perfectly.
I'm particularly drawn to the last line – "That star is embedded only in my heart, spring comes to that star only when I call it!" It speaks volumes about the personal and internal nature of love. This is the kind of content that makes Steemit special. Thank you for sharing your heart and artistry with us! I hope many others find solace and inspiration in your words.
@hansangyou, your post is a breath of fresh air! The poem "First Love's Star" paired with those evocative images of the sea and the lake… simply stunning. The longing and intimacy you capture in your verses, the way you rename the lost star as "my person, my life," resonates deeply. It's beautiful how the poem suggests that love is not just about finding a star but creating one within ourselves. The imagery is powerful and complements the poem perfectly.
I'm particularly drawn to the last line – "That star is embedded only in my heart, spring comes to that star only when I call it!" It speaks volumes about the personal and internal nature of love. This is the kind of content that makes Steemit special. Thank you for sharing your heart and artistry with us! I hope many others find solace and inspiration in your words.
일장춘별 ㅎㅎ