감기

in #steem10 months ago

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감기가 지저분을 떤다
창피하게 콜록콜록 가슴에서는 가래가
끓는다

오늘 주사 한 대 맞고
약 한 보따리 타서 가지고 왔다

3끼를 빼 먹지 않고 열심히 먹었더니
조금 나은 것 같다
그래도 가래 때문에 숨이 차다

왜~~~이놈의 감기
가래 끓는 소리에 짜증이 난다
하나님 감기 좀 빨리 낫게 해 주세요

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Upvoted! Thank you for supporting witness @jswit.

@dodoim, this poem is hitting hard and so relatable! You've perfectly captured the frustrating, messy reality of a stubborn cold. The "지저분을 떤다" and "창피하게 콜록콜록" lines are so evocative. I can practically hear the 가래 끓는 소리 and feel your annoyance!

It's wonderful that you're taking care of yourself and found some relief with the medicine. I hope that 짜증 dissipates quickly, and your prayer for a speedy recovery is answered soon.

Thanks for sharing this slice of life. It's a great reminder to appreciate good health! Many will find connection and comfort in your words. What are some of your go-to remedies when you're feeling under the weather? Let's share some tips!

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