E. M. WALKER CHALLENGE #02 - HUNTER

in #shortstory6 years ago (edited)

HUNTER

The sound of the explosion caused him to run off into the forest. With hearing umpteen times stronger than that of humans; it must have sounded as if the world was coming to an end – when Mary-Jane caused the dynamite to trigger.

With scary defensive howls and his tail between his legs Hunter her trusty hound scampered off into the forest. He remained there until she came down from the hill with Morning Eagle! Hunter had been taught to fear and defend against Indians. He rushed toward them in attack mode, wanting to save his “master” from the enemy. Morning Eagle saw him coming from a distance he took a defensive stance against the approaching dog, pointing the rifle right at him. Mary-Jane went hysterical, but Morning Eagle, swept her aside with one motion of his arm. “Noooooo!” she shouted in fear that hunter was about to die. Morning eagle shot a warning shot which made the hound stop dead in his tracks! He whimpered and whined, overwhelmed by the loud shot.

Mary-Jane called him and he approached cautiously, fearful lest Morning Eagle produce another shot. He growled and snarled at the Indian, but still with tail between his legs. When he reached her, Mary-Jane hugged and petted the traumatised dog. With hunter now calm the three proceeded down the hill.

They walked for nearly a half a day before they reached The Indian Settlement. Hunter nearly went berserk surround by all these Indians, but Mary-Jane had managed to keep him calm, “It’s OK boy, calm down” she repeated. Her soothing voice did the trick.

As soon as they had entered into the “village” Morning Eagle summonsed the interpreter. A dialogue soon ensued, involving The Village Chief. The narrative of the meeting was simple; return the Indian land for protection and sovereignty in the tribe. With tears in her eyes the powerless Mary-Jane conceded. Morning Eagle had a few more demands, he had no intention of returning the rifle, binoculars and hunting knife – he made it official in the negotiations, while she was still vulnerable. He wanted Hunter too, but she defiantly rejected the notion. With swollen wet eyes and high pitched voice, she yelled! “No, you can’t have him...his all I have left.” The Village Chief looked at Morning Eagle, questioningly - which caused the wily Morning eagle to retract his demand. The meeting ended with the village chief commanding of a separate compound for Mary-Jane with all the resources she would require for sustenance. The village sprung into life and by night fall she had a wigwam for Hunter and her. They made and maintained her fire, brought plenty of wood, water and food. Mary-Jane squirmed at some of the food, but thought it would be a good meal for Hunter.

Throughout the day, members of the tribe came to with welcome her with gifts. Some brought animal skins and fur, to keep her warm. Other brought pottery to serve her every need, while others brought her beads and jewelry. Mary-Jane was welcomed into the Tribe around the evening campfire in a ceremony that lasted several hours with, food, drink, song and dance.

Mary-Jane hardly slept a wink all night; the change was just too sudden. When the sun rose the next morning she was a member of the tribe and activities sprung into life around here. She had no purpose, she felt completely bored. Within a short while Morning Eagle was around, with lovely treats for Hunter. He petted and spoiled the dog terribly. The brave was a master animal handler, and soon had the dog eating out of the palm of his hands.


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Over time, Hunter felt the change in social structure. Although, Morning Eagle honoured his agreement not to remove Hunter from her; the bond between he and the dog grew stronger, until they were in separable. Hunter accompanied the Indian everywhere. Morning Eagle soon had Hunter partake in hunting activities; but always brought him back to Mary-Jane at the end of the day...


ABOUT @emwalker
It would be a terrible travesty if I didn't take this time to give @emwalker a proper introduction. It will take you five minutes of browsing his blog post to become a fan of this script writer / blogger / film making talents. His carefree, free writing style is effortless and compelling. Don't take my word for it, see for yourself. Not only is he brilliant at producing content but he his selfless, generous individual that aims to promote others. There is plenty of evidence of this too. The reason, I've ultimately accepted his challenge is because, it's his opinion that I value and trust more than any other individual I've met on the platform.

Cheers Dude!


The Challenge
A couple of week’s back I was challenged by my good friend @emwalker to complete the story that I had submitted for a contest. I had 24 hours respond – read about the challenge Here! (In the comments ). Not wanting to be labelled a "chicken," I took up the challenge – Read about it here. That challenge was immediately foolowed up with this one...


IN E M WALKER CHALLENGE SERIES:
#01 - Wild West Fireworks Challenge Edition


Dust Rule:
I’ve changed my voting habits to take the dust threshold into consideration. All post and comment below 0,003SBD gets reduced to 0,000 SBD. I will not up-vote comments or posts where the potential exist for it to exceed this threshold; as it would count as a wasted vote; since my own vote is below this threshold.

I've been following the post of @thedarkhorse as the reason for my decision. Here is a post by - explaining the issue.


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Fucking eh my dude - I'll be honest its super late here - about 2am. One of the first times I've been sleepy in a while - I'll have to give this a read in the am. so glad you continued this - ill be back in a few hours!!

All cool! It' 8 am here... But I've got great news - the sun's coming your way!

Got you fam. I'll check you when the suns up.

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Hey man sorry it took me so long to get back to you it was a busy day. Started work on my backyard. Pretty sure I broke a finger. Didn't get much writing done. Hope my absence / no reply didn't cause you any undue stress.

You continue to surprise me with the improvements in your writing - your description and wording - the details - the world building - all of it are perfect. Don't get too comfortable. Continue to test the waters when it comes it your voice and style.

If you couldn't tell already - this challenge will continue weekly.

Here we go!!

  • Must be written in the first person
  • Completed Within 7 days
  • minimum of 500 words based on the following prompt.

"A father gets a phone call from his estranged son. He's stressed and requests the two meet. The father arrives at the sons apartment to find the door ajar....."

  • Must contain 3 swear words
  • A YELLOW BAG MUST BE PARRT OF THE STORY - why? Because I fucking said so

Think -
Who? What? Where? Why & when?

I've added a specific perspective to increase the difficulty of the challenge.

Good luck brother. Treasures await you.

Hey Bro,

Check out the finger and and keep us posted! May That be a lesson, Those fingers are meant for fuckin' filming... Shit loads of films! That's all we care about - Give the wife a pair of gloves for the garden OR hire gardening services from profits out of D-tube success...!

Thanks for the encouragement and mentoring, much love bro!

Yip a new challenge to scare the shits out of me... WTF is the first person??? Never mind, I'll figure it out - I told you I struggle with this shit...

I've been doing some thinking about your other challenge, about sharing some of my SBD...

I'll be using 1 SBD from this challenge to fund a SBD Giveaway, So @emwalker will of course be a joint sponsor, watch this space the first one is coming up in the next day or so!

Hi @rlt47, this is a super touch challenge good luck! @emwalker really push you to be better, kudos to him. I have no doubt you can achieve this challenge, but quite suspense reading the challenge here :D

Hi @ainie.kashif, these challenges are super scary - they stress me out! lol!
I'm busy the with the last ones, that's why I'm so quiet...

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