🎧 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #6 SUBMISSION THREAD! 🎤

in rapchallenge •  5 months ago


OFFICIAL SUBMISSION THREAD

WEEK #6


MAKE SURE YOU READ THE RULES!

Yo yo if you are part of the Rap Challenge this week, here it is! Let get all these entries in so we can tally up the scores. This week should be an interesting week because the #1 winner will win a spot on a song with myself and the legendary Pace Won of the Outsidaz. I am looking forward to getting down and dirty and judging these rappers this week!



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Strong competition in here this week. In all honesty, I liked the Sean Price beat better BUT, the lyrics that came out had a purpose so it was fitting to use the Eminem one. Lyrics below.

Most of y'all gnawing on other mother fucker's styles,

eating candy coatings like a misdirected little child.

You ain't being true to yourself, you ain't origi-nigga-nals,

you ain't individuals, you despica-pick-a-piles,

lickin' stick icky smiles, spitting shitty Diddy lines

bunch of nonsense and garbage clogging up your rhymes.

You got a limp-dick offense, I'm gonna fuck you from behind

like Tom Brady did the Falcons in Super Bowl LI.

Spazz out and snatch you, with my Southern Praying Mantis -

AbraCadabra - I've got the 6 magics.

Clash if we have to, I possess military tactics.

I got caches and stashes with ballistic combatants.

X40L1N Warrior. I've surpassed monk status.

I've mastered my darkness and harnessed the bastard.

That's how my reflective perspectives illuminate your trespasses.

You try to copy this and I'll crush your fucking knuckles like a blacksmith.

I told ya before, I ride horses and wreak havoc,

even Pestilence and War bow before my madness.

Lord of the coming storms, a cryptocurrency savage

just like I ravaged this beat with a powerful poetic passion.

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@enginewitty #thealliance ORIGINAL POST FOR SUBMISSION

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Damn kid!!

Sick as fuck!

You killed this one bro!

nuf said

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Ha ha! Thanks a million brosef!

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You bet bro, I really dig the rhymes this week!

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Thanks man, feels good to be letting it out again.

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This post received a 3.0% upvote from @randowhale thanks to @michaeldavid! For more information, click here!

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Loving all #thealliance support! Thank you :D

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Good shit.

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Thanks man 😎

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You murdered that man holy shit

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Oooohoohoohoo that resonates man, thank you!

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you're welcome man i love your flow, your style, your original aura man its incredible. keep doing great things buddy

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Excellent I will, I will. Stay true to myself and let the pen work it's magic man.

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That's all you can do buddy

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Ay you went so hard on this one bro, loved the potent energy behind your devastating bars!
You went in!

"You ain't being true to yourself, you ain't origi-nigga-nals,
you ain't individuals, you despica-pick-a-piles,
lickin' stick icky smiles, spitting shitty Diddy lines
bunch of nonsense and garbage clogging up your lines.
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"I got caches and stashes with ballistic combatants.
X40L1N Warrior. I've surpassed monk status.
I've mastered my darkness and harnessed the bastard.
That's how my reflective perspectives illuminate your trespasses.
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Glad you liked it bro! Had to keep up appearances for ya ;)

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You definitely did your thing bro, looking forward to the next one, you got me pumped

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Thank you sweets!

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should be clogging up your rhymes what I said, was tired when I posted it lol

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It is all good, I think I got that correctly interpreted when I read it the first time, appreciate the heads up lol I be writing rhymes and recording easily past 3am all the time

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Saw you and your boy do beats too huh?

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Yeah we do bro, can't wait to join the beat contest, that's going to be fun, I use Garageband and Reason to make beats. Do you make beats also?

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I used to, a long time ago...but given the fun atmosphere over here...may have to get something set up and play around a little :)

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Yes you definitely should mess around with production, you never know what fire ideas you may come up with. I used to make my own beats when I had no producer friends when I was growing up bettering my love for Hip Hop

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More interested in hearing what comes out, so I'll be rooting for you man!

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Thank you bro, your support is appreciated truly

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This comment got a 2.06 % upvote thanks to @michaeldavid - Hail Eris !

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Appreciate the vote of confidence!

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Great job. You really are giving them the business...and i like it

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Thanks doll, feels good too.

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Aye, big ups coming from you, thanks man!

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DAYUMMM !

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That was a mind fuck (pardon my language). Absolutely loved this. Lyrics are so real o weee

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Hahaha..Why a mind fuck? lmao. And thanks!

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I say that as the biggest compliment I can give to an artist. Mindfucks sell out arenas :)

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:)))

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Sounds good doll, glad ya found the thread.

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Sometimes I follow the rules

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my first female entry! this is epic!!!

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yay!!

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@kaykunoichi I looooove how you rap and your style omg! <3 <3

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eyy barrin up! and adorable (i'm assuming) daughter!

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haha yes that's my Daughter/hype girl!

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nice you got it ma gotta out you on a track

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Thank you!

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real deal skill ,respect :)

Hi Steemit, this is dmalaver from Caracas-Venezuela, Latín América in the rap challenge, listen up:

"welcome to my mind
where you are getting high
a lot of time without rapping
I have accumulated rhymes
I decide
that I just want to kill the beat now in this time
for that reason I getting crazy I want to put problems behind me,
now everybody
wanna battle
with this little body
you want to come to the party
every time I spit the true
I have verses in my pocket
moving your head and your body
you go back to cali-cali
with this lyrics good for you,
If you have the talent
if you have the reason
so maybe,
you can be the MVP of the season
get crazy,
just living the moment and today
forget about the past just enjoy every day
Vamos con todo
yo aquí me acomodo
desde Venezuela
golpeo como Goro
talento muy fino
que siempre combino
que yo represento a mi
pueblo latino
mantengo el sonido
que siempre he tenido
con ritmos que si valen
ahora me despido,
Steemit Rap Challenge, yeah!"
#PrayForVenezuela

https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@dmalaver/steemit-rap-challenge-week-6-venezuelan-flow

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Nice flow bro, I was vibing to the switch up from English to Spanish. Chill stuff

"I have verses in my pocket
moving your head and your body
you go back to cali-cali
with this lyrics good for you,
If you have the talent
if you have the reason
so maybe,
you can be the MVP of the season
get crazy,
just living the moment and today
forget about the past just enjoy every day
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thanks man!!! I like the energy you show in your videos!!

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Thank you very much, glad it translated well. I gave it my very all

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dual language spit, good good bueno bueno

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Gracias!!! I do what I can with the english haha.

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Gracias por el apoyo mano!!

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yo @dmalaver this was really fucking dope as hell bro

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thanks for your words and thank you for impulse this culture!!!

I recommend headphones for this one, full lyrics are provided below so you can read or rap along. I appreciate you all for listening and reading my lyrics.

Verse 1:
I never knew I’d be adopted away from my parents
Read “A Child Called It,” my connection’s apparent/a parent
My heart had turned a brittle-cold, so wasteful and barren
I tried pretending all the years, they were out running errands

I never knew that my Aunt would be motherly caring
With my Grandma housing, feeding me, healing the tearing
I used to sneak out a lot, it was risky and daring
I put my life on the line from the pain I was bearing

I tried to find the right escape, staring out curtain drapes
Trying to bottle hate, still wondering ‘bout my fate
Age 12, I found my faith, fought demons near face to face
Literal sense of case, and beat ‘em with saving grace

People think that I’m playing, Story flow entertainment
But I can’t deny engagement, the spiritual world’s adjacent
Knowledge so real and ancient, vessel I am in placement
Pouring out deepest statements, a gorge of love fighting hatred…so strong!

Song Lyrics Copyrighted by Verbal D

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I fuck with this line for sure "People think that I’m playing, Story flow entertainment
But I can’t deny engagement, the spiritual world’s adjacent" your writing continues to improve, good job homie

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Thank you for peeping the penmanship bro, much respect and gratitude.

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Solid Entry as usual, lotta balls using an Eminem beat xD

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Thank you man, I wasn't feeling any of the other beats, and I knew Eminem's beat required extra effort and performance. It was a solid challenge

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It's tight D, hard to beat man.

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I'm truly only aiming to be better than myself, I know my flaws, thank you bro, appreciate your valued feedback

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I feel ya, I'm my worst critic too. Or best critic? Not sure how that should go lol

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Worst and best, it goes hand in hand bro, I feel the same way about myself!

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Ahh storytelling, always love such verses. Big up bro!

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Thank you very much bro, gotta share my story and get it off my chest

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@verbal-d Ayyeeeee you spit it yo!!!

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Thank you very much my friend, I appreciate you listening, did you get a chance to peep the Queen Official track? You gotta hear it! That pertains to all queens.

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you went in my dude!

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so great flow , respect G :)

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Hardcore shit!!! Love your flow man, pretty Jay-z like indeed.

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:)

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your flow smooth as silk man

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Sickkk, Kinda got a slight Jay-Z feel there haha, dope man!

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@alao Ayeeeee you smashed it!

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Dope bars yo!!!

Back again! Good luck and good work everyone!

Yeh we all talk about guns
Even if we aint got none
Doesn't mean we aint never feel
Like popping open a fucking skull

Self expression is better off felt
Than left unchecked
I wana see my brothers make it
With a lot of self respect

Ever did a job
And got paid with a boncing cheque
With your girl, on your arms
Didn't you wish she was a tech

Work hard everyday day
And still seen as a life reject
I don't wanna be bad
But it just seems like the next obvious step.

Ever seen a 12 your old selling weed on the bloock
only a short time before that nigga ran into cops
parents tried to tell him quit, but he just wouldnt stop
now daddy's growing old in a cell for receiving a drop

Think about a young woman trying to make it in life
She didn't have the patience to grow ups and be a good wife
And didnt do too good in school, lesson just wouldn't stick
Her only option left was working the streets taking them

So forgive if i'm not enjoying gloryfying this shyt
I wanna help my hommies but nigga just isnt rich
I got a few dead brethrens, who didnt do it for fun
And most real niggas that i know, don't deal with guns

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Deep entry with heartfelt lyrics and influential meaning

"Yeh we all talk about guns
Even if we aint got none
Doesn't mean we aint never feel
Like popping open a fucking skull

Self expression is better off felt
Than left unchecked
I wana see my brothers make it
With a lot of self respect

"Her only option left was working the streets taking them

So forgive if i'm not enjoying gloryfying this shyt
I wanna help my hommies but nigga just isnt rich
I got a few dead brethrens, who didnt do it for fun
And most real niggas that i know, don't deal with guns
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Barred up bro, keep it up

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Thanks bro, your opinion is always valued :D

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You're most welcome

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That smile at the end :)

Your lyrics literally gave me goosebumps all the way in Cleveland, Ohio in the States. Holy shit man speak that real shit

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Sweet, mission accomplished!

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Yeahh, some food for thought up in this! Diggin' it brother!

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Awesome, thanks for listening.

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this shit is too fire bro.

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awesome!

Palisade week 6 #RapChallenge submission. Went over "Yonkers" with a verse about Genocide and the powers that be. Hope y'all enjoy and good luck!

Lyrics:

Hey guys! Let's talk genocide,
Like Saddam and Stalin hop in the ride,
Dust storm reform seen through blinded eyes,
bunch of idealists forced to idolize,
warlords on Wall Street weaponize,
low cut lobbyists flaunt to galvanize,
A-K foreplay guards the payday,
go on just keep ignoring what I say,
fuck you like fine print, cut you like a diamond,
everything that shines gets dimmer on consignment,
so depending on the climate, an volatile economics,
balance holds your life in one hand, chance in the other,
fate rolls the dice, an as hate soon discovers,
a little fire on the fuel never takes much,
a little government coup just before lunch,
arm the villagers, pitch forks an all,
life ain't a bitch but she takes it raw for the cause,
sickened, appalled, stifle your applause,
darfur, Chechnya, the holocaust,
all this shit happened on our watch, first genocide the people,
hijack the thoughts, pray on the feeble, till the high wears off,
lethal turned legal, send the piggies to the trough

https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@palisade/palisade-rapchallenge-week-6

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Nice entry bro, went heavy on the ending for sure, too much blood loss, corruption and hatred
"Darfur, Chechnya, the holocaust,
all this shit happened on our watch, first genocide the people,
hijack the thoughts, pray on the feeble, till the high wears off,
lethal turned legal, send the piggies to the trough
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devils in the details

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pray on the feeble

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Those are literally some of the best lyrics I have ever heard in my life, holy shit

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Thank you man, that means a lot to someone who lives and breathes this

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you're welcome buddy. And I know exactly what you mean, some people are in the trenches day in and day it grinding for their dream and some just do it as a hobby. Props to man for sticking it out in the trenches, you will win the war one day

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Yes you will!

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''first genocide the people, hijack the thoughts'' true words, dope!

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thanks homie!

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Yoooo I was really feelin this! You got a unique fresh af style! @palisade

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Thank you! i'm glad you were digging it, check out my soundcloud.com/palisade if you ever want to hear some more original content. at least until soundcloud dies.

Here's Me. Enjoy. feedback would be appreciated. good luck yoll

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Real cool vibe and fresh rhythmic style flow bro
"I'm the numba one spitta in the jungle fam!"

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Lyrics

Im a Houston kid probably off hallucinogens
Scumbag degenerate likely cause of all my friends
tie the noose record my end
In heaven with a fucking benz
Raping every fucking beat i guess this is a sinny sin

Nigga you making dough ?
no homie no you aint eatin
my niggas they making bread
yo oven aint even heated
to stay up in this game you gotta have a reason
or we put a bullet in ya head and give you something to believe in
they come to yo aid like magic but hopefully it aint magic
that shit would be tragic like no bodies in the casket
we killing boys adolf
pull up to your crib cause we caught you on the radar
pull up with the mask off spray you with the AR
we some fucking killers and we never take a day off
shooting like the playoffs i guess the gym done paid off
had to be the boss the cause the company made some layoffs

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You had fun with this one I see, and this line of yours is truth, if there's no known purpose or intention, keep it moving
"to stay up in this game you gotta have a reason"

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thanks bro!

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You're very welcome!

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had to be the boss cause the company made some layoffs...feel that man

-We all know sheep need a shepherd, thats natural/
-But I’m a goat that won’t tolerate the beef wit cattle/
-We were never banished from the kingdom, we ski-daddled/
Left the garden of Eden before we could even eat the apple/
-Fuck bein b-lessed, i b/
More wit that intellect, thats why the stress is more complex/
-Thats why i never spit that lame brain nonsense/
-Talk is cheap, i treat knowledge like dollars/
-I don’t rap to entertain, i rap/
To enter yer brain, overload circuits, blow the mainframe/
You lovin it, I need a beat like a tranny/
Needs a changed name, my rap name, same name, government/
-The man, the legend, so fuck who, what/
Where you reppin, the scared don’t question, so question/
Do you play stupid games just to win stupid prizes?/
-Its a damn shame ya third eye’s been crystallizin/
Breadcrumb stale while I’m innovative and redefinin/
-I keep the peace while you keep the silence/

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Vicious gritty approach as always bro, heavy entry
"i b/
More wit that intellect, thats why the stress is more complex/
-Thats why i never spit that lame brain nonsense/
-Talk is cheap, i treat knowledge like dollars/
-I don’t rap to entertain, i rap/
To enter yer brain, overload circuits, blow the mainframe/
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Thanks bro, and i always enjoy your bars of reality.

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Appreciate that, you're welcome, I know we have different perspectives and beliefs, but we can definitely acknowledge the skill, the pen and other aspects of flow, delivery and presence factors of Hip Hop. Your entries are impacting

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It's a damn shame your third eye's been crystallizin
strick man

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Man you never cease to amaze me. I look forward to judging your submissions every week buddy, always epic

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Thanks Chief.

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you're welcome buddy. just that real shit

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''Its a damn shame ya third eye’s been crystallizin'', oehlala, I like that one, sick entry man!

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"Its a damn shame ya third eye’s been crystallizin" heaviest bar of the challenge this week

Heres my submission SteemIt family...lyrics below


https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@opinizeunltd/steemit-rap-challenge-week-6-submission
I freestyle or writer, lover or fighter
who flyer
chew on a shroom or light up the fire
who higher
my aura shine brighter im a highlighter
i dont walk i hang glide im a skydiver
young macguyver dont need a gun to stunt on negus
& i show way too much love to ever front on negus
beautiful mind so i love to play dumb on negus
an enigma myself cant worry about no one else
shout out to rondonson this contest inspiring
Steem made me put my jersey back on come out of retirement
know im coming out firing
so even if im missing a couple of em gon hit ya
a 1 man army i brought my solo militia
with 1 distinct order kill u and everyone with ya
mister got em on the tip of my stick
and how i serve em in the booth they should leave me a tip

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Ayyeeeee you had me wantin to smoke a bleezy to this!! :D @opinizeunltd

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Fire that shit up lol

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eyyy fam "i don't walk i hang glide i'm a skydiver" yeee!

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preciate it homie

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you nice my g! this shit fire bro....but yo..you pronounce my name Ron Donson lol. two separate names...but you killed this!! Salute homie

First post on steemit, me rapping while delivering pizzas. hope you like :)

Lyrics
zero’s got no rep and one minute set it,
by the way i hate to waste space with a whack sentence,
rap fetish, how am i this fly but this underground,
I'm just turning up the sound,
it was stuck on zero, now i keep it hundred,
keep it bumping, till the sun is up in, the dungeon,
what the fuck is this, fishing in a barrel filled with fifty fish,
with a barrel fifty cal and a packet of ritz,
they go crackers for this, rappers shitting brick,
like a drug mule during and after a shift,
it’s too late i’m too two face, Trying to paint over a dent when I rap,
a rush like a drug when the pen hits the pad,
when i hold the mic, you’ll feel like you saw a poltergeist,
I'll deliver my last pizza like Walter white, on the roof, cold as ice,

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Welcome to Steemit man! Good place to start, got a community of like minded over here.

Hey all, you guys are going ham for this, damn haha!

Tried something different this time, glad to join in! Peace!

Lyrics:

Call me a luck fucker, a fuck lover, a bloodsucker
a vampire, I am fire, like fuckin' with no rubber
the not-to-be trusted, always bitter like mustard
the dinner like supper, the want-to-cut-like upper
the skull scalper, the skater with no helmet
the go to hell-and-back and soul seller, the globe dweller
the ghost buster, the Postmodern, the past present
the history on repeat itself, the bad habit and caffeine addict
the butter on toast, the bragger on boast, the hash pipe
the outsmokin'-wack-rappers-with-ass-gass guy
the outspoken, the untold of, the inner Dungeon Dragon
your lost passion, the ''you don't have a talent'' talent
the sky scraper, the shift shaper, the social justice hater
the broke money maker, the Benjamin without the paper
the college dropout, the tell the teacher: Teachers never made it
the prayer that's never heard, hah, the savior slayer
the ink spiller, the paint eater and painting spiller
the cheating with baby sitters over your baby sister
the baby momma's hitter, the gettin' hit by their mister
the I-don't-give-a-fuck white cracker with no privilege

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thanks!

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LMAO that last line got me bent man.

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Hahah, especially in this day and age, it just seemed so funny to me aswell, thanks man.

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Sure thing man.

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eyy good shit mang!

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many thanks mane!

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sick , brother ,sick :)

You got my vote and a resteem :]

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Bless up! Bro! Will follow.

Forgot last week and almost did again this week but whipped this up real quick! Thanks for holding us down @rondonson and props to the other contestants!

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human microscopic super zoomin

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Fresh bro, keep them flows zoning into the multidimensional journeys

Anyone who has experienced depression will relate to this -Burning Zeal-

Lyrics:
RIP to Chester Bennington, so depressed and negative
The most positive mental states senses it
Till they need antidepressants, to function in my presence
They say I’m the deadliest depressant
Waking up in the middle of the night in a cold sweat
That feeling like the world’s gonna end
Barely energy left to be technical
Sorry rhyme schemes, remind me of depression
Too complex sometimes and don’t make sense at all
Ejecting this message off my chest like a cockroach
Releasing eggs, seconds before they’re dead
Could never start to live, before my birth descended in the depths at the end of death
Tried Dettol for the scars, STORY is healing's a TALE
Like cutting off a lizard’s, pain just regenerates
Penetrates so deep, your soul levitates to escape
The start of anesthetics yay no pain!
But no pain paradoxically hurts the most
The numbness has some feelings like a paraplegic
Prosthetic feet is stepped on "medic!" hie hie

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Good flow man, trump

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o weeeee killed it

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Thanks bro

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absolutely buddy keep doing great things