I Feel Nothing (An Original Short Poem)
I feel strange.
Half light-hearted, half heavy-handed.
You know when you get a song stuck in your head
and you can't get it out?
I hate that.
That's sort of what this feels like.
I feel better.
Less panicked, more confused.
But a good confused.
You know that feeling of warm water
running down your back
when washing your hair?
I love that.
That's sort of what this feels like.
I feel great.
And nothing.
This is just what I needed.
A warm bath and a quick nap.
Last Seven Days Poems :
- You are Important.
- Don't Come Back.
- Can I have what I lost?
- Over a Cup of Coffee.
- Do What You Love
- Hold On.
- Looking for Home.
It's good to read so many sensations that are common to me in a poem. Thank you my friend
I am glad you had felt like this.
Thank you for your comment!
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Thank you @firepower.
Means a lot.
Short yet hitting the nail on the head. You have been to able to explain your feelings aesthetically. Nice job.
Glad you liked it! Thank you so much :)
And nothing. From nothing everything comes. Thanks for your perspective!
Hope you enjoyed!
@mindfreak
You nailed it again :)
Thank you @qagiri :)
Numbness and hot showers are the best thing honestly. One of the perfect moments just to relax where you're in a space where you do not need or have to think.
Yes. Totally.
Thank you for giving this a read.
You're welcome. And I just related, so thank you for sharing :D
I am following you now ^^
you are a good writer..
Thank you so much :)
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Amazing poem had made! 😊
Thanks!
Your welcome 😊