Steemit Open Mic Week 104 ''El molino'' - Original Song.

in #openmic6 years ago (edited)

Hello Steemit!

Here is my entry for week 104 with a song I wrote just recently that for now I will call ''El molino'' , it's still an incomplete song for me but I dediced to throw some little production tricks to see how it works in a ''band context'' , so i programmed a couple things around it and added some backing vocals. These quick pre-productions are quite fun to make and are good to give you a general of how a song could work out in a finished version. I am thinking of doing a video tutorial about this ..maybe I can share a couple ideas , also how to work on other's people music , two posts that are ''in the works'' right now ( in my head at least hahaha).

The inspiration for this song came about trying to bring down in a little poem how it feels to be lingering and waiting for that ''music moment'' to happen, and what can it mean to be visited by it. It's a very short poem that I just tried to decorate with some music. It was inspired by @torico as she mentioned I could write a song per day .. which I WISH was true .. but with that in mind I thought writing some lines to the inspiration itself :P .. yeah.. I'm weird. Thank you Tori for the idea :D , you earn all the cookies!

Hope you like it!

''El Molino''

(Pechiche Mena)

La voz de su pecho
esta sentada al lado del sendero
Su sed en un gotero
va secando poco a poco el suelo

Sus pies que marcan en el agua
su dolor , su tiempo
La brisa que vestirá sus sueños de color
y versos la visitan

Son palabras que recorrerán tu cielo
Un velero que descansará en tu puerto
Un molino que te viste con destellos
que no se cansa de girar

Here's a translation:

''The Windmill''

(Pechiche Mena)

The voice in her chest
is sitting besides her path
Her thirst in a dropper
is slowly drying up the soil

Her feet that mark in water
her pain , her time
the breeze that will dress her dreams with color
and verses visit her

These are words that will surround your sky
A sailboat that will rest in your port
A windmill that dresses you in light
that doesn't get tired of turning.

Thanks for listening!

Pechiche Mena

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maestro de las armonías vocales :)
Voto para que ganes Openmic!!!!!!!!!!!!

hahahahah gracias Hector :P

Pris me va a quemar el estudio con las velas jaja ;)

So beautiful, Pechiche...
I love this so much...

Thank you very much brother ! and btw .. congratz on the mash-up ! it's killing :D ! cheers!

Every day, write songs! I think that's a good secret to success as a songwriter, isn't it?

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate it .. I will mail cookies to @anouk.nox then :D... some for you too !

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@pechichemena, cómo estás? Que buena canción que presentaste!! muy merecido el primer puesto !!.
Felicitaciones !!

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oooh pechi this is such a lovely song! i love the chorus :) i will accept da cookies and share dem with all da peoples. hug

Here you go <3

I love this song, wow you are so talented @pechichemena .. Really nice voice and I love the song too :)

Thank you Nouky Nox :D , I'm glad you liked this little songy song but I think the whole trick is in the jacket... what do you think of the jacket??? that's the important question...

Big hugs <3

Pechi

Muy buen tema, ya deberías ir pensando en grabar un disco. Tienes mucho talento y muy buenas letras. Te felicito mi hermano. Reesteem

Está en ello creo... (que fangirl ha sonado eso hahaha)

muchas gracias Beto ! Y si. como dice @yidneth aca abajo.. estamos justo en eso :D !


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Thank you for the support :)

Qué bonito Pechi.... Me encanta las armonías, tengo un día super sensible que me ha sacado una lagrimita y todo.

Dear @openmic judges @Pechichemena as winner please (right about time)! Not biased at all... listen and read the translation. Sigh!

We always take you for granted Pechi... you're a bright light burning.

Gracias Pris Querida por las lindas palabras y perdon que me demore tanto en contestar :) , siempre estas por aqui dejandome palabras de apoyo y te lo agradezco de corazon , no quemes el estudio nada mas con velitas si ? hahaha beso grande!

hahah :) Un placer, sólo digo lo que honestamente pienso, y que no queme el estudio depende de los jurados de @openmic porque yaaaaaaaaaaaa PECHI ya eeehh? YA OS VALE! HAHAHA!

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