Steemit Openmic Songwriters Challenge-Week8-Original Song-Til' We Meet Again

in #openmic6 years ago

Another one take wonder, as my voice is still barely alive. But it went okay so I think you can get the vibe...

What can I say, this whole challenge has been quite an experience!

Of course many many thanks to @meno and @luzcypher as well as judges @passion-ground and @krystle for their hard work and endless encouragement.

If you said to me that I had to write a song every week, on someone else's schedule, and someone else's theme, I would say "I can't do that !"...I don't think I have even written eight songs in a year before. Also I can't usually try to write about something, the song has to come of its own volition.

I realize now that "I" can't write a song every week as I said above.; these songs seem to happen as "downloads" through some miracle of God's will and your inspiration.

It's similar to a time in my life when I was reading the Astro Logos for people; I would always say to myself five minutes beforehand "What the hell am I going to say to this person, I have nothing!"...and then somehow the miracle would happen.

This has been the same, every single week I would look at the theme and say" I've got nothing! I can't do it!" and then the download would begin.

Having said that, just as it was a song title that I saw on @davidfar 's blog that inspired my entry for "Because We Can"/ Week 4, this week it was @basilmarples and his moving performance for "Wind Swept Shore"/Week 5.

But if you are reading this, it is for you to...Peace

Until We Meet Again

Here's one song
To help you along
And keep you my friend
Til' we meet again
But you don't need
To learn it from me
Cause you already know
The word

One song
Is all that I've sung
We may not be near
But I will be here
When you need
To call out to me
You already know
The word

Til' we meet again
We've come to the end
Of

One song
Not very long
A moment to sing
Our own melody
And we'll be
In good harmony
Cause we already know
The word

Love

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Damn, brother. What a wonderful intro, which really set the stage quite nicely for your final performance in this challenge.

I dunno, man - as soon as you hit those first few chords I couldn't help but choke up some.

What a fine way to end this 8-week stretch of creativity and camaraderie. You rocked it once again, brother - just like you always do!

Thank you my friend. Your kind words and encouragement have really meant a lot to me and you have inspired me so much. You know the word!
Peace brother

I dunno, man... Peace or Grease... Which is the "word?" :-) Doesn't matter - ... I get it, and so do you - along with so many others... Now, that's the word and feeling that needs more spreading! Thanks, OneTrue - I appreciate all of your kind words and sentiments more than you can imagine.

It was on my sign...love

Ahhh - And therein lays the distinguished realm between "peace" and "grease" - Love is indeed what makes the world go round for the majority of us... There's no place I'd rather be immersed rather than within the realm of "love" - and passion, of course... :-)

Man Did you realize that you just expressed, in part, the archetype of chiron..."peace" or the Ground or Outer realm, and "grease" or the mundane, "fatty" manifest creation. You are the channel man!

I had no clue - but I'll tell you this - I trust your insights in such matters like no other.

It is ever-so flattering to contemplate that I may indeed be a "channel" of any sort... For that, I am eternally grateful! Thank you, "OneTrue!"

Those healed, become healers... so the story goes, anyway... and Yes, I suspect that I can readily qualify for such standing...

Beautiful.

I 100 percent share your feelings today. I felt like - I have nothing. Download. record :)
Somehow I feel part of the process of songwriting, is letting go of the aim to write a song and just really giving up. To surrender completely so it can come.

I was just thinking about this...I hope this isn't too esoteric but I was thinking about human creativity and the archetype of Chiron. In terms of the solar system Chiron's orbit takes it both inside and outside the orbit of Saturn. The human being is "half monkey, half angel" as McKenna would say. So the human being has access to the realm of the larger forces in which we are embedded, through the imagination,inspiration,etc. . But also acts as a bridge or go-between to the more mundane reality. So we can have an idea and actually bring it into reality, and also be the vehicle for an expression that has its source outside of the self.
Anyway I don't want to bore you but yes, I agree and I am always re-learning that the well will never run dry .
Peace and thank you

Ah, so now we get a small peek into that which perhaps - to some degree - inspires our most esteemed, one-true-brother... That's heavy, man - But you ain't heavy, bro - you're my brother! So with that, I shall ponder, and appreciate all of your thoughts and esoteric insights... :-)

Dude you made me laugh!...one of my favorite things.
The Godfather of Sink lives on!

LMFAO - right now..... Love it!

So thrilled that this inspired you so - and brought back to you that special "download" power to which you refer. I have yet to listen - only "read" thus far - but for sure, brother... It truly is something special and out of this realm that reaches you in such a special way - and thank you so much for sharing such special gifts with all of us. Peace! (and now I'll hit the play button...) :-)

good post good voice :)

Thank you, I hope to be singing better soon!

Dude this place is crazy. Just listening now. Rock and roll!

Hey welcome...you have found a cool place here. Do what you do, all the best.
Be well peace

Your writing skills really shined over the course of this 8-week challenge. Very impressive.

Hey man thanks. My short time on Steemit has been incredibly fulfilling, mostly because of you and your work here.
Much love

Ditto for me as well, brother... Thank you, Luzcy!

This song sent me back to my teenage years when I had the biggest crush on Cat Stevens, your voice is so beautiful, even when it's barely alive!

Hey there congrats, we made it huh?
Thanks for the compliment..you know I keep running into synchronicity here on Steemit. I was actually thinking of Cat Stevens after the song was written and I had some separation from it. Not that I would place myself with him, but just a vibe. Last week I heard Dan Fogelberg's voice in my head after that one was done.
Thanks for stopping by and be well my friend
Peace

Yay this is lovely, another great song, and your voice sounds great despite your difficulties!
It kinda reminded me of the upliftingness of a Cat Stevens song... peace train.. well Peace to you too @onetruebrother!

Aha I just saw Geena mentioned Cat Stevens too! Well you should 'place yourself' alongside him. Why not walk with those you respect. "Rise and keep Rising until Lambs become Lions". xo

I was shocked that I made it through that take...I had tried to record it the day before but my voice broke down half way through...I ended up changing the notes I sang and left out some higher notes so it wasn't exactly as I hear it in my head...but thanks!

wow trubro. I am so honoured. Thankyou so much for this, it is an indescribable feeling. I can't tell you what it means to have inspired you, but also to have been received by you, and to have the energy bounced back in such a generous and soulful way. So often our difficult energies, our anger, frustration, sadness and everything else just sort of get absorbed by the cosmos or something without feedback, sometimes its a lonely feeling but I can honestly say that this feels like true connection. True relation. Family. Friendship. The confirmation that we are all out here, in our little pockets of existence, feeling deeply, needing to connect, to create, and to receive and to listen and without always knowing how. Somehow this community is providing a new answer to some of these previously unrequited abstract needs, and I would like to thankyou for being such a wonderful part of that. This song really means a lot to me. Much love to you my friend. It has been an honour to create beside you in this challenge and to share our journeys week after week. Im sure this is just the beginning! x

Hey there my friend! I agree with everything you say in a big way. I am glad that you like the song.
If what I am about to say does not resonate as true for you please put it aside. Normally I would only speak of these things in a private one-on-one situation and with permission. This song is indeed from me to you, but my experience of it was as a "go-between" to deliver a message from someone else. I wept like a baby the whole time as it came through...isn't life mysterious and beautiful?

This whole challenge, and the openmic community have been incredible for me...

It is snowing here; absolutely silent

Love to you too...until...well you know

haha! he said that is his real name.. but should we believe him? i am so happy you did this for him!! he has inspired all us so much!! hasn't he??

ONE INCREDIBLE SONG YOU WROTE MY FRIEND! i am so thankful for you all many of the other contesntants!! i am so glad that i met you and that i got to hear your songs every week!!! it is such an honor to be a part of something so huge as the open mic and as the songwriters challenge!!
This is a magical place!

You might think i am over reacting .. but i love it here... and i love you and all these other greats musicians! Thank you for sharing your music with us!

Thank you I feel the same way about you and everyone here.
This challenge really has been a magical experience
Congratulations to you my friend!
Peace

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