Hold On (An Original Poem)
"Hold on. Breathe"
Was not being okay
actually okay?
Because,
there I saw him.
Suffocating himself
with all his troubles,
and hiding them.
Behind that perfect smile.
If only, not being okay,
wasn't a way of
showing that you're weak,
then today,
he wouldn't have been
killing himself
with all his troubles,
she would
have a mind at peace,
and the world would
have been a better place to live in.
Live in,
with people who are strong and
are allowed to become tired
of being so strong.
Last Seven Days Poems :
- She.
- Burnt Souls
- Human
- A Desire For Love
- I Remember
- Finding Home and Holding On
- I Was There
- Bleeding Angel
Nice man. Even m indian..feels grt when people like you make our nation so proud. 😀 cheers
Thank you so much 😊
hard stuff in this poem.
Suffocating himself
with all his troubles,
and hiding them.
Behind that perfect smile.
This part resonated with me the most :).
Thank you so much 😊
It feels amazing to read your comments
Well written. What a poem!
Thank you so much mate!
Welcome bro