Haiku: Hardwork

in #haiku6 years ago (edited)

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Even a mountain—

Will crumble against hardwork

All efforts will pay


They say nothing beats effort and hardwork, and it's true. Only through effort and hardwork can we achieve anything. Only when we use our sweat and blood can great things happen. So work hard, it's worth it.


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What is the difference between traditional haiku and freestyle haiku


Traditional haiku must follow a pattern, 5-7-5 (five syllables in the first line, seven in the second line and five in the last line with a total of 17 syllables). In freestyle, there is no set amount of syllables. The idea there is to catch the spirit rather than the form of the original Japanese art form.


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I appreciate your explanation of the two types of haiku. I_ve never written freeform haiku. I'll have to give it a shot. 😎

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Ahhh poetry. Once upon a time I used to write them, haiku too. But that was a long time ago.

That's such a shame. It'd be great if you can write a poem again. Also, thanks for visiting.

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